PICTURE PERFECT - CHAMPIONSHIP FINALS!!! - Perma Frost .vs. DisHonouR

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  1. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    DISHONOUR AKA CASTRO PRESENTS THE PICTURE PERFECT - PIC BATTLING TOURNAMENT

    FINALS - PERMA FROST vs DISHONOUR

    Well, well, well. Last Round was AWFUL! No-Shows were killer, but im sure that won't be a problem this round, atleast it better not be! We have the final 2 extremely skilled competitors ready to duke it out in an all out grudge match. The winner of this battle will be declaired the champion and will be rewarded all bragging rights. This match will determine who is in fact PICTURE PERFECT
    Below are the dates, line limit, voting rules, ENJOY!

    DATES
    Verses DUE - Wednesday, December 31st. (By 11:59pm)
    Votes DUE - Saturday, January 3rd. (By 8:00pm)

    LINE LIMIT
    Final Round Battle - 16 Lines

    VOTING
    Outside voters are able to vote, BUT a 500+ post count IS neccessary. If you have legit reasoning why a vote shouldn't count, do not bitch about it in the thread, hit me on aim and explain the situation, I will then determine whether or not the vote counts.

    Failure to abide by ALL rules that I have set will result in your termination from this Tournament, and perhaps even further Tourny's that will be held.

    May the sexiest man win!!!

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    DISHONOUR

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    PERMA FROST

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  2. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    CZEEEECH!

    goodluck homie holme holmes
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  3. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    yeah you too...how many lines do u want to go
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  4. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    read the rules foo, it's 16 lines

    czech
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  5. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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    just to let you know, instead of "obied", it's abide.

    good luck guys..
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  6. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    ok ive got 16.
    edited
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  7. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    I'm not losing to trailor trash ; you winnings nothing but doubt
    A walk in the park? nah this n.iggas just posing, in front of his house
    you arent lookin grimey in pics, that wardrobe was never cool
    and your road to success ; is just a dirt trail to elementary school
    dis got anorexic structure, take ya physical tips...who would ?
    since things never work out with girls, maybe YOU SHOULD
    diss is dressed like an athlete, you aint a baller u dumb fool
    and he aint just sit the bench...aparantly he sleeps on one too
    ya looks are worst than ya writtens, and im known to kill herbs
    I know ugly when I see it......and DH looks familiar
    face it you werent born to be an athlete, you got bland dreams
    cause skin and bones are the only thing that run' in ya family
    put a punch to this fairy, fake homo you shouldnt be talkin...
    when ya verses got more strings attached than the hoodie ya rockin
    ya styles inconsistent, plus DH isn't fluent with grammer...
    so he'll lose in the slaught' like an abusive gambler

    what happened to that boi
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  8. CySeGawd*

    CySeGawd* Get Down With The M

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    why is this ugly dork saying "n1gga" lmao
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  9. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    czeeeech

    the competition must suck since you in the final round;
    when you so god damn fucking ugly that even your smile frowns
    theres silence now, young'n, cause your belt is gone;
    this faggot got more balls around his fuckin chin than elton john
    im felt in song, fuck wit the kid you left dead and in a ditch;
    hahaha, peep the pic....this fuckahs noes is redder than his lips
    so im a wiqqer + trailor trash, its deep when he's coming at me;
    so forget calling me names, focus on keeping your cousin happy
    you an ugly motherfuckah, i'll punch until this nerds gone;
    first guy to goto mardi gras n' get beads to keep his fucking shirt on
    trust, my words bond....its true you's a fag, im not lying;
    how you gon' tell me your straight when even your face is lopsided?
    just stop frontin, easily this dude'll get dropped, nothin...;
    cus the closest he'll get to gangsta......is undoing his top button
    its over n' done, but before I go...im filein another;
    question, why is your right eyebrow higher than the other?
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  10. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    voting rules

    anyone can vote.
    unless you are militia

    thanks
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  11. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    *looks on in pure awe*
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  12. rhyme.

    rhyme. iwin

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    lol this was a nice final.. props too both..

    dh consistant as fuck.. a good verse from start to finish.. i liked ur opener the best.. got a laugh out of that....

    perma.. quite consistant too.. i liked ur workout line.. the bench and slaught lines.... the rest were coo.... i think in the end imma go with perma just for the fact he has maybe 2 more that i really liked... dh was consistant but never had enough ooh lol......


    dope battle tho.. :)
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  13. Bi)C(kZ

    Bi)C(kZ Bi)C(Z

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    Vote: Dis-honor he was stronger, and better with the personals
    alot funnier.
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  14. A.S.K

    A.S.K ...

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    ^^
    did you read the bit which said 500+ to vote

    nice battle: dishonour you came consistent all the way thtough and some hard hitting lines....but nothinbg really jaw dropping

    perma you came nice, with good flow and vocab, and some lines hit mediocre

    vote:dh
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  15. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    lmfao.no comment dissy....

    *funny*​


    btw i'll edit a vote in later.
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  16. Serge dot T

    Serge dot T Guest

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  17. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    1-1,

    and I told you @ ahem, you just gave me a better person
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  18. Black Majik

    Black Majik Immortal

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    Perma-Bench line made me chuckle, Slaught one i liked, just overall came harder and more direct in my opinion.

    Dh- pretty good, came out and just tearing away at ever aspect of the pic, but permas verse and especially some of the lines made me laugh, and just overall appealed to me more,

    therefore -

    Vote = perma
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  19. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    ...Hmm.

    Perma had a couple of good hits (strings attached, workout), but you didn't have the
    consistency going for you. Nothing REALLY funny, just some good material, but nada
    made me laugh. The flow was cool, and some of the concepts you used had potential
    to be better (..run in the family, bench). I think your wording hurt you in most cases.

    DH, you had some flaws too BUT you did have some lines that made a ••••• grin while
    reading (top button, cousin & mardi gras). You started off aight, & it was up & down
    from there on. You'd have a nice line, then afterward have a line that was half-assed.
    I think you had A BIT more consistency than Perma, but that's my opinion. OH YEAH,
    You fucking SUCK for letting that Elton John concept be "alright"..That could've been
    a blazer in your favor.


    Vote: Dis
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  20. Text Jesus

    Text Jesus Registered Savior

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    v - perma frost

    perma's best

    I'm not losing to trailor trash ; you winnings nothing but doubt
    A walk in the park? nah this n.iggas just posing, in front of his house
    you arent lookin grimey in pics, that wardrobe was never cool
    and your road to success ; is just a dirt trail to elementary school
    dis got anorexic structure, take ya physical tips...who would ?
    since things never work out with girls, maybe YOU SHOULD

    that & his closer were dope.

    dissy

    the competition must suck since you in the final round;
    when you so god damn fucking ugly that even your smile frowns

    you an ugly motherfuckah, i'll punch until this nerds gone;
    first guy to goto mardi gras n' get beads to keep his fucking shirt on

    just stop frontin, easily this dude'll get dropped, nothin...;
    cus the closest he'll get to gangsta......is undoing his top button

    those were all fire, the chin line could have been waaay better though, you used it as a soft smack, it could have been a bitch slap. the rest of your lines were straight, except the closer.

    pieceiola
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