~Perfect World~

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  1. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    If I could find my perfect world,
    I wouldnt have to cry,
    and people who dont understand me wouldnt try,
    I wouldnt need weed
    because my rhymes would keep me high,
    I would have eternal
    confidence within me as I write,
    It would be so easy
    for me to finally find true love,
    I would be able to
    do anything I want, without being judged,
    I would hear people
    give props to everybody just because,
    I would know that
    no language is being spoken by forked tongues,
    I would hear people
    teaching and inspiring the young,
    I would watch the news
    being able to know that no murder has been done,
    I would know that there
    wouldnt be any chance,
    of needing a jury or a judge with bloody hands,
    I would see racism
    disappear as all the cultures danced,
    I would see equality
    knowing that money doesnt determine status,
    I would be free
    of obstructive thougths causing malice
    I would know
    that heaven waits for me when I die,
    If I could find my perfect world,
    I wouldnt have to cry.
    test
  2. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    Well, I am glad to be the first to post on here because I like to be. I like this piece, definitely something that we all think about sometimes, but then as it is said be careful what you ask for because what you want usually isnt what you need...But, this is something that we need, to bad that it will never happen...It's hard to quote just one piece of the poem without quoting the entire piece....So, just know that this is some good stuff...And friend, you dont need weed to get you high, let your rhymes lift your spirits...
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  3. A.n.g.e.l.i.c

    A.n.g.e.l.i.c cash-flow.

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  4. Teen Prodigy

    Teen Prodigy Short2003's e-child

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    that would be a perfect world indeed.. and thus.. good drop.. lol
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  5. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    A . n . g . e . l . i . c ,Teen Prodigy, thank you both for your replies, I appreciate it.

    Xero as always I embrace your words and I thank you for sharing your thoughts
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  6. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    i wish...this was a dope piece...really liked it...keep it up
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  7. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    lpoet thank you for the reply...look forward to seeing more of your work....get postin;)
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  8. FukkedUPKidR

    FukkedUPKidR Guest

    "If I could find my perfect world,
    I wouldnt have to cry,
    and people who dont understand me wouldnt try,"

    "It would be so easy
    for me to finally find true love,
    I would be able to
    do anything I want, without being judged,"

    Wonderful ^^ I'm really liking the poems I'm reading tonight! Thanks for sharing.
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  9. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    FukkedUPKidR thank you very much, I appreciate the time you took to read and reply..thank you
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  10. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Yeah you not the only one who wishes these things. Great job

    one luv
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  11. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    from the heart, very nice
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  12. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    Mind~$oul, nOn thank you very much for reading and replying...much love

    peace
    test
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