Peace upon my head

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  1. jesuit223

    jesuit223 Member

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    Time split
    The egocentric
    Masquerade in my head
    I amassed some pride
    Became attached
    Today; without it
    I'd be better off dead
    Time caught
    My imaginings
    Ever so off-guard
    I began to recite memories
    I recalled
    The masquerade
    As a sort of
    Fundamental element
    To the creator
    Of my essence
    test
  2. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    very dope. short, consise and hard hitting. good word placements a-z


    I amassed some pride
    Became attached


    ^ I felt that


    keep up your thang sis.
    test
  3. jesuit223

    jesuit223 Member

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    Thanks man, it means a lot to have someone like your ish... glad you enjoyed it ;)
    test
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    MC Shogun New Member

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    test
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