|-paragon-| vz L Kross

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by |-paragon-|, May 12, 2009.

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  1. |-paragon-|

    |-paragon-| The Phoenix

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  2. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    lol@asap... ten minutes later

    Ill drop first, I hope this pussy dont get scared off
    Squared off,
    Leave em how I found em, with his pair-gone
    Balls checked!
    Watch the wizard shoot, who you kiddin, duke?
    An I bet
    Phoenix dont rise from the death that I send him to
    Im not invincable, just sheilded from this simple newb
    Dont you get it?
    Its not a verse I could drop an not deminish you
    So you can go ahead an write sixteen if you want
    An still suffer a KO to these ten Im keyin him up
    Leakin a fuck, ashes to ashes on fire, cleanin him up
    Keep bein a chump, you really gonna be in the dust
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  3. |-paragon-|

    |-paragon-| The Phoenix

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    simmer down L, before this whole site knows your wack
    your punchlinez must got trapdoorz.. bcuz therez never any contact
    and we could expect that in this match and any other infact
    i say youra weak poser.. you say you dont know where the cameraz at
    keep sticking your neck out, it wont be in use anymore
    cuz the way i snap my fingerz, is meant for murder not dance floorz
    you stupid whore.. always craving hookupz attention
    but cant get it, bcuz "attention whorez" donations are pendin'
    and itz all good, id rather send you packin instead
    you went from lotus to l kross to daisiez.. being pushed when im dead
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  4. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    im sure you meant ill be pushin dasies when im dead. lol
    good luck
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  5. |-paragon-|

    |-paragon-| The Phoenix

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    no.. bcuz even when im dead.. ima still be pushing your ass around. lol
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  6. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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  7. hYpOconDriAdIcT

    hYpOconDriAdIcT New Member

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    aigght heres how i see it.

    L. Kross..
    i think u came wit a more advanced style.. but for a battle i thought u coulda been more harsh wit ur disses... u had a few hot lines but only a couple really caught my eye.

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    Ill drop first, I hope this pussy dont get scared off
    Squared off,
    Leave em how I found em, with his pair-gone

    ^^^^pretty good opener

    paragon..
    I didnt really get some of ur lines, like they made sense but the punch really didnt land. and the rhyme scheme came off real basic.. infact i dont think u rhymed more then one syllable in a any bar.. not sayin u have to but if u dont, ur content gotta be really strong and urs wasnt.. and i didnt get the closer.. sorry dude

    vote-L Kross
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  8. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    ^explanation not nessesary lol
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  9. Sir. Ebral

    Sir. Ebral Sir. Ebral Bright

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    vote - paragon

















    jk
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