Painted Picture

Discussion in 'Writer's Block' started by *Princess*, Jul 6, 2003.

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  1. *Princess*

    *Princess* skantless bitch

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    this isnt one of my poems, but i dont know who it's by, but I really like it, you guys might know me at *prncessRekar*, but my name got screwed up...so this is my new one...

    I'm gonna paint a picture, a picture with a twist;
    i'll paint it with a razor blade, i'll paint it on my wrist
    and if i paint this picture a red fountain will appear
    and through this gushing fountain my trouble will disapear

    at a place where i dwell i met a boy, i love so well
    there he took my heart from me, and now he wants to set it free
    i went home and cried in bed, not a single word i said
    my father came home late last night and looked for me left to right

    through my bedroom door he broke to find me hanging from a rope
    he took a knife to cut it down and on the floor he found.
    'dig my grave dig it deep, marble stone from head to feet
    on the stone please place a dove to show the world i died for love'



    I know its sad, and depressing, but i like it.
    test
  2. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    thats pretty tight shit right there^
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  3. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    ahh... brilliant poem. so depressing and i've felt like this before... but lawd... this was a great piece of poetry.
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  4. Rekar

    Rekar Old Glory

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    ^....Runs in the blood...our son...is goin to be a sick ass writer....
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  5. Royal Sovereign

    Royal Sovereign New Member

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    Damn yo.... thats a fucked up poem right there! I feel it though. I love its depth and the message that it sent!
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