~Out The Window~

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Mind~$oul, Feb 19, 2005.

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  1. illpoetical

    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    this piece is tight dawgs, i liked the effortlessness you wrote it with as l said. each verse stands on its own and has its own power. i really liked the flow, it seemed like a song that a nas would do or common tight man, tight
    test
  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    I appreciate the love. Uppin one last time.
    test
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