Out of tha box!(pay attention)

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  1. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    HI IM REDEYEZ (LOL)
    OUT OF THA BOX
    OUT
    OF
    THA
    BOX
    OUT OF THA BOX
    OUT OF
    THA BOX
    MY FLOW FINE,VIVICA FOX
    HYDRO RHYMES,OUT OF THA BOX
    MY FLOW WINE, OUT OF THA BOX

    OK
    OK
    FIRST THING FIRST
    FUCK THA WORLD AND IT'S OCCUPANT'S
    FRIDAY THA 13TH VERSE
    KILL'N THA COMP' WITH MY CONFIDENCE
    I'M DIVINE WHEN I RHYME, U THA OPPOSITE
    I GOTTA' SHRINE OF MY '9' AIM POSITIVE
    BUT, THA OUT COME ''NEGATIVE''
    D.O.A ''AFFIRMATIVE'', CHECK MY ANTONYMS.......

    MY FLOW FINE,VIVICA FOX
    HYDRO RHYMES,OUT OF THA BOX
    MY FLOW WINE, OUT OF THA BOX

    MY FLOW FINE,VIVICA FOX
    HYDRO RHYMES,OUT OF THA BOX
    MY FLOW WINE, OUT OF THA BOX
    OUT OF THA BOX?
    YEAH OUT OF THA BOX


    I'M TRYNA GET MY FAMILY OUT OF THA BOX
    I'M FROM THA HOOD
    WHERE WE SALUTE TO THA SOUND OF A GLOCK
    MY PAIN NOT ''SURREAL''
    SINCE HE GOT ON ''SMACK''(S) I AINT FUCK'N WIT' ''POP'S''
    FAREAL...
    MOMENT OF SILENCE EVERYBODY KNEEL....
    .OK. CHECK IT,
    BE CAREFUL WHEN U SPIT'N YA FIRE
    IT CAN GET U LOCKED UP, THA MIC IS A WIRE
    EVEN WHEN U TYPE, UNLESS U A LIAR
    U IN BEEF? BECOME A VAMPIRE
    DUCK DAY LIGHT, IT AINT A COWARD MOVE IT'S STRATEGY
    LET IT PASS,SERVE EM'COLD DISHES 1ST DEGREE OR BATTERY


    MY FLOW FINE,VIVICA FOX
    HYDRO RHYMES,OUT OF THA BOX
    MY FLOW WINE, OUT OF THA BOX

    MY FLOW FINE,VIVICA FOX
    HYDRO RHYMES,OUT OF THA BOX
    MY FLOW WINE, OUT OF THA BOX
    OUT OF THA BOX?
    YEAH OUT OF THA BOX


    I BE TALKIN TO THA DEVIL, ROCK-N-ROLL HEAVY METAL(GET IT)
    RE:I NEED RICH'S AND BAD BITCH'S.
    DIABLO:WELL''SELL ME YOUR SOUL IT'S YO'DECISION
    WHERE WOULD I GO,WHEN MY LIFE FINISH?
    TO THA DEPTH'S OF HELL,AN ETERNAL PRISION
    IF I SAY YES, WILL I LIVE MY VISION?
    INDEED,NO MORE PAIN U DON'T NEED RELIGION
    ''EXCISION''.
    I HEARD I WILL BE IMMORTAL TO
    TRUE, YOUR NAME WILL LIVE FOREVER IF U FORSAKE'
    WHO?
    THA CREATER OF ALL
    IF I COLLECT ENOUGH SOUL'S HIS KINGDOM WILL FALL
    HOW CAN U DO IT ISNT THA EARTH DEDICATED TO GOD?
    YES BUT SOON IT WILL BE MINE,JOIN OR SLEEP WITH THA COD
    THA WORLD WILL BE YOURS? HOW CAN U TELL?
    HAHH JUST WAIT TILL TWENTY-TWELVE


    I TOLD U WAS OUT THA BOX...............
    BANG
    3 SUBJECTS, 2 REAL 4 MOST
    1 MIND...MINE
    IM OUT..













    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1243693-story-time-tim.html#post1067634785

    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1243252-who-tha-f-ck-suspect.html
    test
  2. Radical Sun

    Radical Sun New Member

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    Nice flow.
    Liked the hook.
    I want to blaze out and have a bowl of cereal now.
    test
  3. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    I'M TRYNA GET MY FAMILY OUT OF THA BOX
    I'M FROM THA HOOD
    WHERE WE SALUTE TO THA SOUND OF A GLOCK
    MY PAIN NOT ''SURREAL''
    SINCE HE GOT ON ''SMACK''(S) I AINT FUCK'N WIT' ''POP'S''
    FAREAL...
    MOMENT OF SILENCE EVERYBODY KNEEL....
    .OK. CHECK IT,
    BE CAREFUL WHEN U SPIT'N YA FIRE
    IT CAN GET U LOCKED UP, THA MIC IS A WIRE

    Liked that bit, especially the first couple and last couple lines.

    Nice work.
    test
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