Original Clubness

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  1. TrueScribe77

    TrueScribe77 New Member

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  3. Blocc_Rocc

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    THanks for hittin my thread...i appreciate it...

    but yea
    this is decent.....my main beef is that bell constantly hittings every bar....mad annoying....it can easily be fixed tho....
    beat is pretty simple 2.....sounds like somethin i could hear being played during a car or mcdonalds commercial....not much too it..like i sad its decent


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  4. The Lyrical 187

    The Lyrical 187 The Superstar

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    Cool beat, im wondering if it chould be concidered a club beat. Im sittin here trying to picture women dancing to it. I dont like that whistle sound. The drums sound good. I think is more of an anthem like track then a club track tho.
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  5. WillieK

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    returnin the luv

    humm.........not feelin the melody overall, the sound is sik, but the emldoy u came up wit aint workin manh, dunn really like that lil wristle thang that hit every time hte snare hit, the breakdown in each verse loop reminded me of sumthin frum Timbo, kidna kwel, drum is on point, def club ish

    yea, jsut not feelin the main melody manh
    otehr than that it's fine

    keep it comin manh
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  6. Brownstar

    Brownstar Davadrian

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    yo, i'm feeling this.. i don't think it's a club joint though. It has that Nate Dogg feel to it in my opinion. I actually like the whistle thing.. I'm listening on headphones and it's not coming out so loud, i'm sure on my monitors the whistle would be annoying me too. I'm feeling this man, def can hear Nate Dogg on this. Keep grindin... Up this shit.
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  7. TrueScribe77

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    I actually reduced tge whistle to every 1/4 snare instead of every one I think it sounds a lot better thanks for the feedback yall.
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  8. Auditory

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    damn this is hard club shit to the max. that low bass hit with the distorted conga sounding things is hard. i could see this turning into a bangin ass techno beat. But anyways for a hiphop beat is pretty coo. that whistle synth doesn't bother me. The low synth melody starts to get old kina quick though. Id like to hear what this would sound like without that synth and just the drums. my fav part of the beat is that Bass hit iwth the distorted congas. I just keep picturing that booming louder and more often. keep droppin em mayne
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  9. HyLyte

    HyLyte ~Blu Spy~

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    the synth is illa feelin it more on sum g type shit then the club but feelin this beat overal drums was coo fittin for the vibe keep bangin!!!
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  10. Arkane Beats

    Arkane Beats www.arkanebeats.com

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    Damn this is a really crazy soundin beat lol, I could see this bein a club hit, shit is just unique as hell, nice drop man
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  11. DjayCasper

    DjayCasper Eh Fuck It.

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    im likin this overall

    real nate dogg soundin joint
    that lil flute soundin synth that comes in ey now an then sounds hot the lead is good too

    eything else is hittin
    keep it up really no complaints on it.
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  12. Dre Derelict

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    Some interesting shit going on in this. Besides what everyone else mentioned this is cool. The distortion thing is cool, I think once an emcee laces it though the mix may have to be done a little cleaner so they aren't competing with the beat so much. Simple but effective. Cool shit
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  13. Phoenix5891

    Phoenix5891 T.S.K.

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    I like the composition...the mix isnt good tho...Its too loud & there too much reverb on that snare..keep grinding
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  14. TrueScribe77

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    Thanks for the feedback yall
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  16. Xabiton

    Xabiton RM Veteran

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    thanx for hittin my thread

    This is a lil overly distorted for me personally. The synths sound good tho but Id chill on the distortion effect on the other instruments. I could see this in the club tho I dont know who I could see rappin on it. I dont like that bell sound that comes in at the end of the bar either. maybe a every 8 bars or so would be good but every bar is too much. This is ok not great but not bad either. keep workin good effort
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  17. PLT Productions

    PLT Productions Baltics Most Wanted

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    returnin the luv...

    this is nice...luvin them drums, hard hittin shit... luve that synth flute...the main synth sounds good..strings are nice man..synth is lill to loud..could work on a mixin...
    nice shit man
    keep bangin

    -PLT
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  18. Raticus

    Raticus Beatz for the streetz....

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    This got a dre feel to it.. Like the sythn usage.. Drums cool a little to electric ish... Overall good tho... Peeping some others ...

    Raticus
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  19. SCI

    SCI -=Divine Aggression=-

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    once engineered and mixed down properly i could here xzibit killing this one nice track. i hear da whole of an xzibit verse in my head whilst listening to this nice shit.
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  20. Young Brook

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    Have the bell come in randomly instead of constantly and the beat is fire..
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