Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by fuck_a_nella, Sep 23, 2005.
i like the beat, nice shit,
this sounds straight, the only thing i could say is to pronounciate your words a lil better, and maybe put the vocals a lil higher, just a tad i could hear it clear and all but some words are muffled, overall this track is straight, the hook needs to be tighter at the end, but im feeling this concept and your energy on this, is more like your voice is driving it, good shit,,
listening, beat is diggable, got a rza-esk delivery I'm liking it, dubbs are placed perfectly, liking this man, hook should be louder, good shits homey, holler
word the fuck up
nice flow, slower than i thought at first... lyrics are ok, could be better...
hook- nice, feelin it
2nd verse- dope
glad i peeped, peeace
listenin ... beats aight not bad ... flows aight needs polishin ... or jus more emotion ...
overall not bad ... Hook was cool ... didnt like the beat change though ...
Dubz were off in the hook too ... besides the things to work on not bad at all thanx for peepin mine Pz stay up
The beat was ok, I didn't really get into it all like that...I think you need to work on your delivery, cause it just seems like your talking over the beat, and it gets boring real quick, plus the emotion could use alot of work. You gotta make what your saying to the listener seem believable you know? Overall this wasn't too bad, just work on your delivery and emotion, and the rest will fall into place. Keep elevating man you got potential...Peace
REturnin the favor
Listenin....the beat is cew...style is cew, voice is a bit hard to get into, but oh well...lyrics is straight, the hook could be better....overall, not too bad of a song. Peace
Feeling The Beat...
Wasn't Really Feeling The Flow...You Were Like Completely Ignoring The Beat. The Hook Had A Better Flow...But You Should Fix Your Overdubs...Or Maybe That Was The Effect You Were Going For...Cuz They Sound Like They Weren't Timed Properly And They're Overlapping Eachother Improperly. Second Verse Sounds Better...Flows A Little More On Point...Delivery Is Aight Too...I Think Your Mic Pressence Is Your Strong Point.
Overall...Not Bad. Return The Favor? http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=931004
Yeah some of the shadows/overdubs were out on this. Made it abit hard to get into at times. I quite like your delivery tho, I'm a fan of understated flows. I think the depth of your voice can effect your clarity at times, I have the same problem with my vocal tone. I think this was pretty solid tho. Hook was mixed a little bizarrely too tho and made it less clear. I find when my voice is doubled up it takes away a fair amount of clarity. I think this is the same case.
Solid shit tho. I quite liked this. And I liked the beat.
word @ whoever said this had a rza feel to it..
good shit on the whole, abstract, liking it..
word the fuck up peoples, thankin y'all
aight...beat sounds tight so far...good shit....
ya flow sounds good for the most part....overdubs is throwin it off here n there....lyrics are oo....feelin em....i like ya voice yo..shits pretty original...reminds me of someone just cant picture who....ya prescense is there...deff feelin that....vocals sound kinda muffled a lil..need some eq'ing...
this shit was tight yo...i fuck with it...type of shit id rock on a daily basis....good lookin on the feed man..always appreciated...
thanks man, anytime dawg
beat is tite lol
nice song man
beat is pretty cool.. ya voice is cool, you can work on ya emotion a little more sounds like your holding back, lyrics are dope i like em, u got some meaning behind ya lyrics too
the hook is cool man, keep rippin
peep it out
thanks for the feeds
not feelin this beat really, dont like the bass line at all, makes it sound too fruity and not melodic
word, ur delivery and voice is very rza-like, think u need to work on ur emotion tho, u dont enunciate and deliver ur shit smooth enough, sounds like u dont rehearse ur shit and just reading it off the screen, cuz u put no real emotion behind it
flow is on point, not bad, content is decent
hook is aiight
not a bad track, just need to put more effort in making us BELIEVE u believe in what u sayin
check out my new track sometime, thanks
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