Opshins 1-0 Vs. Frame 0-1

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    12 lines all i got time for....leavin thursday
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  3. Frame

    Frame RBC Legend

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    fine with me, g`d luck
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  4. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    ANOTHER week i dont have to try


    My lines will bash you, gored with red skin
    And leave a split in Frame
    Like i missed the seven and ten pin
    Ur a mistake in life, wish ya moms aint have fertility
    Coz what kind of douche thinks
    Being an RBC legend gives him RMC credibility
    Kid, i could have u depressed, ya not stepping see
    Ya verse about to have a break down
    That could make McNabb seem worthy of MVP
    But really, why u got a smirk, u needa stop laughin an
    Realize u havin dope punches
    is like the NHL season.........NOT happenin


    gluck RBC LEGEND
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  5. Frame

    Frame RBC Legend

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    how you gonna diss my status, you just an ol` square
    yeah i`m a RBC legend while your a legend ... NO WHERE
    and i`m nice with the hands, one can make you vommit
    my fist will Dock, Op like they was in a spider man comic
    plus this kids like Lebron James, the hops can hurt a few
    so if this battles a toss up, looks like Op aint got vertical
    i`m a true pimp - so you can see how nice i roll, ~~~~~~~
    cuz after this the only women thatll feel u r chiropracters
    just so i aint break rules, here another 2 to for the fuse
    you say you didnt try? HELL i wouldnt either if i knew i`d lose
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  6. Frame

    Frame RBC Legend

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    the edited shit was c.racker
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  7. MFB

    MFB Ciroc Boys

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    Opshins

    My lines will bash you, gored with red skin
    And leave a split in Frame
    Like i missed the seven and ten pin
    -LOL, nice-
    Ur a mistake in life, wish ya moms aint have fertility
    Coz what kind of douche thinks
    Being an RBC legend gives him RMC credibility
    -another nice personal-
    Kid, i could have u depressed, ya not stepping see
    Ya verse about to have a break down
    That could make McNabb seem worthy of MVP
    -ok...-
    But really, why u got a smirk, u needa stop laughin an
    Realize u havin dope punches
    is like the NHL season.........NOT happenin
    -pretty good closer-

    Frame

    how you gonna diss my status, you just an ol` square
    yeah i`m a RBC legend while your a legend ... NO WHERE
    -nah, wasn't feelin' it-
    and i`m nice with the hands, one can make you vommit
    my fist will Dock, Op like they was in a spider man comic
    -nice-
    plus this kids like Lebron James, the hops can hurt a few
    so if this battles a toss up, looks like Op aint got vertical
    -nah-
    i`m a true pimp - so you can see how nice i roll, ~~~~~~~
    cuz after this the only women thatll feel u r chiropracters
    -nope-
    just so i aint break rules, here another 2 to for the fuse
    you say you didnt try? HELL i wouldnt either if i knew i`d lose
    -ok closer-

    Ehhh...ok battle here, their was a clear cut winner by a far margin. Opshins had some clever personals..and some ok punches...where as Frame, i honestly wasn't feelin' your stuff. the spiderman line was ok...but except for that iono...Good luck next week fella's

    v0te- Opshins
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  8. Orange407County

    Orange407County Well-Known Member

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    shitty shitty battle..

    vote - opshins..

    just because his verse wasnt too horrible..the legend line..was coo cause its true..and the split line, kinda forced...was coo tho..

    frame aint really have nothin, opener was good..true, but nothing else..iono

    thats how i call it..
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  9. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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    eh, didnt care for this battle

    frame had the opener...doc oc, not op man

    opshins had the opener also, which was cool...and then the legend line was ok

    v-op
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  10. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    split a frame wuz kinda predictable but ok still...legend line wuz coo...frame's legend line wuz nicer...dock op coulda been nice except his name is doc oc and not op...that ended frame's chances of winnin...


    vote=op

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  11. Vary

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    My lines will bash you, gored with red skin
    And leave a split in Frame
    Like i missed the seven and ten pin

    ^Pretty good flip, but still a played concept

    Ur a mistake in life, wish ya moms aint have fertility
    Coz what kind of douche thinks
    Being an RBC legend gives him RMC credibility

    ^pretty good

    Kid, i could have u depressed, ya not stepping see
    Ya verse about to have a break down
    That could make McNabb seem worthy of MVP

    ^Decent, could have been worded better tho

    But really, why u got a smirk, u needa stop laughin an
    Realize u havin dope punches
    is like the NHL season.........NOT happenin

    ^ok, but really simple




    how you gonna diss my status, you just an ol` square
    yeah i`m a RBC legend while your a legend ... NO WHERE

    ^Really simple

    and i`m nice with the hands, one can make you vommit
    my fist will Dock, Op like they was in a spider man comic

    ^lol, prolly best punch in the battle

    plus this kids like Lebron James, the hops can hurt a few
    so if this battles a toss up, looks like Op aint got vertical

    ^lol, witty line, I liked it

    i`m a true pimp - so you can see how nice i roll, ~~~~~~~
    cuz after this the only women thatll feel u r chiropracters

    ^Played, and too simple

    just so i aint break rules, here another 2 to for the fuse
    you say you didnt try? HELL i wouldnt either if i knew i`d lose

    ^ok, coulda been worded better tho



    I think Frame had two of the best punches in the battle, he had two lines that were a lot more witty than what Op wrote. Ops best line was just a played flip, I think Op coulda won easy, but just didnt try any. Rest of his punches were just eh, easy shit he threw together almost.

    Vote-Frame
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  12. TeNk

    TeNk New Member

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    dock op and opener i was feeling from frame

    and opshins had the opener.

    frame came wittier, but fell off alot with that played chiropractirs and closer. opshins had a lotta simple shit.

    but yeah, vote frame
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  13. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    Frame came better...ops maybe didnt try or suttin but it was a lot of played cliches wich isnt the worst part but he executed em poorly too...
    so therefore

    vote frame..better overal verse altho I see a lil room to improve their too
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  14. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    if i could hand out two L's i would..but Op was a lil better,

    both were bad though
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  15. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    i didnt have a cliche in my verse...uppin for good voters
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  16. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    well the split line was...the rest wasnt that bad I guess just wasnt too good neither..I jus wasnt feelin it homey better luck next time
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  17. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    v- op

    wasn't too great, but his blah lines were better than frame's blah lines. frame's opener and closer were the only lines i kinda liked.
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  18. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    a split in frame....isnt a cliche....ive never heard it as a cliche before
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  19. Spitzaphrenic

    Spitzaphrenic Registered abUser

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    can't argue that you didn't try here



    vote = ops

    basically it was the seven ten pin line, I never saw it comming, but it looks like you came up with that line then decided to just key the rest, and it worked, there were too many holes in frame's verse
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  20. Vary

    Vary Active Member

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    its been used at upn multiple times, then whole bowling thing and pins been flipped and used a lot.
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