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  1. Atmosphera

    Atmosphera New Member

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    oOLiesOo

    These are lies
    Lies
    Lies
    That underlie
    And undermine
    Everything
    That determine
    Everything
    Whether consequential or not

    And these highs alike are lies
    Nothing like November skies
    Nothing like your misty eyes

    THESE ARE LIES
    And you know I'm screaming for you
    You should hear how my voice meets the ocean
    Rich, tremendous, and collapsing
    Knowing you don't hear me
    That you can't possibly hear me

    (It amazes me that all your words are perfect. But what is even More incredible is that your silences are too.)
    Atmosphera, Jun 4, 2003
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  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Why have you been hiding from us? Loving this mos def. Your style is so unique, i cant even explain.

    (It amazes me that all your words are perfect. But what is even More incredible is that your silences are too.)

    some deep shit right there.

    one luv
    Mind~$oul, Jun 4, 2003
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  4. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    that was nice..i can imagine hearing that in spoken word..not much said..but enough said that it more than spoke its point. nice job
    skandelous_lala, Jun 4, 2003
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  5. Atmosphera

    Atmosphera New Member

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    Thanks

    I Got Pissed Because I Can't Correct My Title As I Dont Like Typo's


    Why Cant You Change These Things Even In Edit ?

    Thanks For The Love
    Atmosphera, Jun 4, 2003
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  6. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    nice . very different but great
    h.wood, Jun 4, 2003
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  7. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    "(It amazes me that all your words are perfect. But what is even More incredible is that your silences are too.)"

    A great quote! I'll be remembering that one for the future, heh. Anyway, a great piece, no doubt. You're on the rise to becoming one of my favorites reads here in the Realm, due to the fact that you come with different concepts within a love type of twist or anything else in other topics. I really was diggin' this one and will be dropping into your other pieces, in the future, as well. My blessings..
    TuNed RooT, Jun 4, 2003
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  8. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    (It amazes me that all your words are perfect. But what is even More incredible is that your silences are too.)

    had to snatch the quote myself...

    damn...

    like i told u before...i dont know why the hell u didnt wanna post your stuff.....excellent piece once again

    still waitin on that pic
    lpoet, Jun 5, 2003
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  9. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    this was dope

    read it a couple times, don't think i have a complete interpretation yet, but nonetheless great piece


    that quote at the end is ill also, so true
    Nimrod, Jun 5, 2003
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  10. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    me too... i like that last line in parenthesis.
    *GeMiNeYeZ*, Jun 6, 2003
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