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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Lyrical B^tch, May 26, 2003.

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  1. Lyrical B^tch

    Lyrical B^tch New Member

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    10 minute keystyle..yall lemme know wusup...



    I got three things runnin..
    shit in my room as scattered
    as my thoughts...as the chick
    from Floetry takes it to the
    bridge on my favorite track..
    which is number twelve
    by the way...I see the credits
    rolling on whatever show that
    is comin through my t.v screen
    and while my mother is standin
    at my door..yellin bout somethin
    i can only think about you...
    I dont even hear my moms
    yellin or my radio blarin..
    I can only hear your voice...
    I could care less bout whats
    on the television or the bright
    lights burnin a hole through
    my pupils...
    I can only see you...
    and although the wind
    is blowin a soft breeze through
    my window gently raising the
    little hairs on my arm..
    I can only feel you...
    and although its a lot of
    fine n*ggas out thier...
    with a just as sexy personality
    and just as pretty eyes...
    I only want you...
    I only love you...
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Different way of looking towards the love and the one you want. I felt this was a very delicate, emotional piece, indeed. Imagery in this was excellant, speaking of your surroundings and what exactly had been happening at that exact moment. I heard not voice, yet thoughts from you, which I found elegant. My blessings..
    test
  3. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    Miss B, I say you just go 'head and give homeboy a call...He got you droppin all these 10 minute sugar verses...Go ahead and get you some...Lovin' that is. :)
    test
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Nice lil keystyle here.

    one luv
    test
  5. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    haha, yeah, what augee.ali sed.
    nice.
    test
  6. Lyrical B^tch

    Lyrical B^tch New Member

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    ty everybody..lol..and to your comment augee i cant call him..weve tried to make it work too many times and it just wont..:(
    test
  7. nice 1 lady B, follow ya heart
    test
  8. Lyrical B^tch

    Lyrical B^tch New Member

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