one way out

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  1. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    the system isn't men's, "if you grow, we'll make a deal"
    it's if you show, they'll take all you can feel
    this is true when you grow to deal with who isn't breathing
    your own crew is deceiving you into tools for beatings

    who am i believing ,when it comes down to it?
    me myself and i, that's why i'm here with you, chowin the bit
    now in a bit, they'll take me to death row for my crime
    shoutin n shit, hell is an oasis touring criminal design
    stay a bit find shine, in all the finer things inclined to
    only to remind you of what's behind you
    walks on beaches with white sand
    her talk cons with features in my hands
    we still do get blinded by times span

    on one hand it's a life lived by choice, in both now is control over mirage's
    facade's to make some feel power, is somehow a toll for plea bargains
    overpowered 'n raped multiple times, pride's final hour
    devoured by uncle sam, sunshine's still powerless
    i will get out of this, that's the thought to rely on
    hope that might be gone, that you'll see one bright dawn
    in the time that you're on this Earth, no snowboarding or surfing
    can't go float currents, an innertube's there, if only you were in it

    an infinite list of hopes
    limitless jokes by friends you havent' seen
    maybe never will, grass making you itch only in dreams
    so lonely it seems life isn't worth living with whats given
    is it random chance you have problems?
    didn't your dad solve em? is their a name to call them?

    since shames a problem and it gets left out
    it's lets sit out time, grounded by big brothers contract
    found in lies to convince time is lived with no other contacts
    besides combatants you had never met before then
    sad clever veterans of war's, men never let out since fourteen
    had been severed, since then without an ounce of self esteem

    condemned to live in doubt, forget what's in "the outs"
    it's been about 10 years since my first strike bracelets
    at first i'd take it out on other inmates, then moved on to guards
    when proved beyond hard, the walls weren't really so large
    one day i'd get a sergeant, or the warden himself
    ive done bad more then ive helped
    and that's for the shelf, a room entered in perfect health
    entombed forever in hypodermic hell
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  2. GaLaTeA

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    That was a niiice drop. :props:
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  3. patrown

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    Thankyou Galitea. There's a video of me puttin it down on harlem streets, what I wrote it to..
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  4. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    yes sir this shit was fire yo nigga u need to put up more post son i can see the potential in your verses keep doin it big
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  5. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    edit: double posted\/
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  6. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    you pump em out all day man i appreciate the feedback.
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