one way out

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  1. patrown

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    the system isn't men's, "if you grow, we'll make a deal"
    it's if you show, they'll take all you can feel
    this is true when you grow to deal with who isn't breathing
    your own crew is deceiving you into tools for beatings
    who am i believing ,when it comes down to it?
    me myself and i, that's why i'm here with you, chowin the bit
    now in a bit, they'll take me to death row for my crime
    shoutin n shit, hell is an oasis touring criminal design
    stay a bit find shine, in all the finer things inclined to
    only to remind you of what's behind you
    walks on beaches with white sand
    her talk cons with features in my hands
    we still do get blinded by times span
    on one hand it's a life lived by choice, in both now is control over mirage's
    facade's to make some feel power, is somehow a toll for plea bargains
    overpowered 'n raped multiple times, pride's final hour
    devoured by uncle sam, sunshine's still powerless
    i will get out of this, that's the thought to rely on
    hope that might be gone, that you'll see one bright dawn
    in the time that you're on this Earth, no snowboarding or surfing
    can't go float currents, an innertube's there, if only you were in it
    an infinite list of hopes
    limitless jokes by friends you havent' seen
    maybe never will, grass making you itch only in dreams
    so lonely it seems life isn't worth living with whats given
    is it random chance you have problems?
    didn't your dad solve em? is their a name to call them?
    since shames a problem and it gets left out
    it's lets sit out time, grounded by big brothers contract
    found in lies to convince time is lived with no other contacts
    besides combatants you had never met before then
    sad clever veterans of war's, men never let out since fourteen
    had been severed, since then without an ounce of self esteem
    condemned to live in doubt, forget what's in "the outs"
    it's been about 10 years since my first strike bracelets
    at first i'd take it out on other inmates, then moved on to guards
    when proved beyond hard, the walls weren't really so large
    one day i'd get a sergeant, or the warden himself
    ive done bad more then ive helped
    and that's for the shelf, a room entered in perfect health
    entombed forever in hypodermic hell
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  2. patrown

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    video of me hittin that on the beat i wrote it to, harlem streets.
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  3. patrown

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    edit: iono y i like this so much..
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  4. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    nice to read along as you flow...you seemed to be in your zone
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  5. Brit Boi Gee

    Brit Boi Gee raison d'être

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    Some good content here but you slapped this together sloppily and it loses some charm because of it.
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  6. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    hmm it almost reminded me of like the gangland show
    but then it reminds me they way so many of us think,just to get ahead as quick as possible,only to have time catch up to you sometimes much later on,then you think about how overdue karma may really be...
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  7. patrown

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    i appreciate the feedback.

    need to memorize things before i even think about recording.

    horribad listen... just read it if you haven't press play yet.

    i just got out too fuck.
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  8. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    patrown is a free bird now, out the belly of the beast for slingin

    MY HOMMIE
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  9. patrown

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    wudup coup!! thanks man. feels good to be out and about.

    I may be in the hole, but it's not solitary so I could care less.
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