One dude woke up mind broke up bad dream and need mad steam

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  1. bagglad

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    One dude woke up mind broke up bad dream and need mad steam
    For coffee concerned about his shoes turned on the news tv screen
    Listed the updates, and the corrupt fates overnight the scandals
    He could never handle turned to weather channel now sandals
    On his feet, opinions somehow sways, nowadays corruption is stealth
    Like the production of wealth it’s captitalistic perhaps ballistic self
    Control is deft and bold said words at a feast that disturbed the peace
    He was feeling dizzy dealing with DRAKE drizzy on CD increased
    His HIPHOP now his gift is sick have to use arithmetic to combine
    The totals but he can’t add up bad luck doe can look dumb online
    To him this THANKSGIVING stuff deep not enough sleep a blind
    struggle because his mind puzzled truck guzzle too much divine
    fuel and times are cruel find himself in duel like Mr McCloud on
    HIGHLANDER chop off head in a drop dead moment get strong
    From the after math now on a disaster path really lost in traffic
    THANKSGIVING no work a great repriece raked leaves a graphic
    Sight now he fire up the grill and thie require skills the charcoals
    Start to burn he was smart to leran about barbecue techniques told
    In books really needed a map of the land to adapt plans a bowl
    Of potater salad haters invalid but steak meat is great to eat being
    A damn thug he went to Sam’s Club bought some ribeye I’m seeing
    He’s not a dumb guy he was filled with hope and the grill smoke
    Smelled through the neighborhood and the flavor was good choked
    The average by stander the grill was burning strong that’s no joke
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  2. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    hmmm.. u listen to drake, huh? im startin to see the problem
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  3. Bloody Red

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    while I was reading through i never could really catch it , could be my fault , it was like 10 different topics in one type of thing ,, witch in some cases could be raw , it had a poetic type feel , like how you worded it , but no real flow to follow nore message ....
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  4. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    stuff right on time continue to read
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  5. MrFlux001

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    Don't doubt yourself, he often throws in some much irrelevant, out of context shit that it baffles the mind and makes you doubt your own intelligence.

    Bagglad, PM me when you're writing shit that makes sense and you aren't writing your verses as one running sentence.
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  6. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    Oh my god... I was starting to crave another Bagglad drop, this is.. by FAR your best work.

    "Control is deft and bold said words at a feast that disturbed the peace
    He was feeling dizzy dealing with DRAKE drizzy on CD increased
    His HIPHOP now his gift is sick have to use arithmetic to combine
    The totals but he can’t add up bad luck doe can look dumb online
    "

    The imagery, the wording, the timing ... absolutely amazing
    @GaLaTeA @MissAndrya @Baron Mynds @L u c y @Shadow @soundunkilthim
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  7. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    ^^^you do this on purpose lol
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  8. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    How dare you, sir?

    I am merely in overwhelming awe at the talent i will never attain, it hurts me but alas, i must give recognition where its due.
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  9. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    Upping...

    Come on guys, you're sleeping.
    @bagglad - you got any more gems sitting in the notepad.txt files?
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  10. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    How am I only just now seeing this?
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  11. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    ahhaha... didn't eb ban this dude already?
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  12. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    @KriminaL

    You're the biggest enabler I have ever seen.
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  13. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    tks for all the props on this one for real
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  14. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    How dare you, sir!

    lol.
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  15. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    You're still around?


    Wowzers.
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  16. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

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    i don't think i'm the guy you're thinking of.. apparently there was an older head that went by this name...
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  17. bagglad

    bagglad Member

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    tks for all the stuff up in here for real
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  18. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    MADDRAPPER why oh why... damn.. one long sentance with a very choppy flow. Id break this down, but that would all be in vain.
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  19. Envy

    Envy Song Writer / Artist.

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    u r juz jelus bro.

    this shit rides in est lundun.

    brappppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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  20. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    lol... nice
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