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beats pretty nice, feelin it.....lyrics are ill man, some mad deep shit....sorry bout ur grandma....delivery is good, nice emotion....flows good, theres room for improvement....hooks nice, feelin it....second verse is dope too...nice well thought out lyrics, u def spittin from the heart, props....overall, this is a pretty nice track, diggin the deepness of this fo sho....keep elevatin n spittin that realness yo...peace
You can't go wrong when it's from the heart. I feel a lot of emotion on this, and the lyrics are definitely good..the only thing I could say to work on is your delivery a little bit..this is definitely on some deeper than most stuff. Sorry to hear about your grandma too. good drop.
peepin...deep track...1st verse was good,flow was good delivery was good...u remiind me alot of introspect cause of ya voice...lyrics was nice...deep.....hook is good....2nd verse was the same...on point...deep kinda track...quality of the vocals was pretty good...nice effects for the hook......props on this....
nicley done...good drop....
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Beat is nice what is the name of it
Verse 1 - Lyrics are nice and very deep and emotional, presenc and elivery is nice
Hook- nice emotional hook and rides the beat well
Verse 2 - RIP to your grandma you had this verse ill and it was straight from the heart which made it better nice shit son
listenin ... beats aight ... I feel the concept and youre emotion is there ...
flow could be polished up a lil .... But we all can polish up so it wasnt bad ...
hook was cool ... second verse ... like the first Iwas feelin it ... Dope track
thanx for peepin mine Pz
first off r.i.p to my grandpa too....came in...emotion..mannn, im feeling u on this...al this shit is real...this why music is so real...cuz of real situations....keep ur head up..feelin the verse..
hook is solid.....feeling ti, simple but efective
2nd verse...came in a lil edgy,picked it up tho...same shit tho as i said above.....
all i can say is, polish up ur flow and get ya delivery down ull only get better..solid track homie, stay up
thanx man uppin
This was aight man
R.I.P to your grandma
Emotions there but delivery isnt there yet but you puleld this off alright man like other duke said youll only get better
im feelingthe lyrics
1st verse is better than the first STAY UP HOMIE
wake up!!! dont sleep
qualitys cool... beats nice..... flows cool.. rhyme scheme coulda been more complex kinda simple n u flowing kinda old school.. deliverys cool coulda put more emotion n shit in it.... lyrics cool felt it.... chorus is iight... overall coo shit
This was aright kid.. some real shit.. good to see..
im not gonna leave a long winded reply or anything just gonna Up this for ya cuz its good to see kids from the city doing there thing
RIP to your grandma
i agree the motion is there, but the delivery is lackin a bit.. of course the content is there, since it all real
hook im not diggin it.. words are good, but its not standing out
2nd verse same as the 1st
can't really crituqe this because its heartfelt...
but i really like this....especially since i could relate..
and thats real man..
i'm goin to download this..
peace to u
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I hate to critique something so personal
the beat is pretty nice....I think your flow could use a little improvement....I cant critique the lyrics...its you expressing you....overall though this was a decent listen
Excuse me if I seem to be rude but I want to give you true constructive criticism. I think you could go back and do a real nice song and still make it personal. Songs like this are Jay Z Regrets and Nas - Memory Lane. Go and add some nice word play so people can relate to your issue as well as admire your lyricism. Check my shit out in my signature.
iight thanx uppin
uppin last time, dont sleep
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