"On My Own" New Officials Track - Could hear Common or Black Thought all over this

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  1. TyJilla

    TyJilla Dawty Music

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    "On My Own" 20 minute jawn - Could hear Common or Black Thought all over this

    What up... This has good vibes... nice song to sing or rap to....

    smoothed out... some get soulful type ish...

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    "On My Own"

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    Hope ya'll enjoy this one.... drop feeback.. links.. ya'll know the routine..

    P.E.A.C.E.

    ~Ty
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  2. Ray Digga

    Ray Digga NeosulOSkoolAbstrkHipHop

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    This feels more R&B ish than neo soul, but still smooth feeling it......


    Keep building.....


    Digga
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  3. TyJilla

    TyJilla Dawty Music

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    Thx digga... it was a quick drop... i might drop some vocals to it.. and post em up somewhere..

    thanks for checkin it out!

    P.E.A.C.E.

    ~Ty
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  4. Mellow Madness

    Mellow Madness aKa sTaTiK

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    i'm diggin that piano panned 2 the left.. and the pretty thick vox/strings whatever u wanna call them.. the snare not really diggin.. drums sound kinda low.. but the bassline is pretty creative to pick the beat back up.. i'm now noticing that vox is mixed high.. like it almost drowns the remainder of the instruments.. the adding of the others strings are coo.. i'd say better mixing on this..

    return when u can.. px

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=816961
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  5. TyJilla

    TyJilla Dawty Music

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    thx for critique.... will return the fav this evening..

    P.E.A.C.E.

    ~Ty
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  6. STATEMENT-BTZ

    STATEMENT-BTZ Fuck Your Mother

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    quailty is real nice
    this is a dope ass beat
    pretty simple but i think this could turn out a dope track
    keep um bangin
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  7. Raticus

    Raticus Beatz for the streetz....

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    Pretty nice... Laid back ish.... R&B or HIPHOP ish.....

    Raticus
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  8. Mighty GK

    Mighty GK omg 2012

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    yeah just turn down that 1 string thats really loud..it overpowers everything else...if it was lower I think this would be a lot better.

    otherwise, everything else is hot
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  9. LISN

    LISN United States Marines

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    very nice tyjilla, love teh whole feel.. definately some rnb shit with mad emotion on there... Ifigured this would be worth it's while so I came and peep.. the bells and all are very nice... tags are funny with that crunk sound on such a soft beat.. ahah.. great drop Ty, quality def up./... One.. drop feed and holla at me..

    LISN Back with New Mellow Piano joint..
    "Black and White Keys"
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=815985
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  10. Unoriginal Bastard

    Unoriginal Bastard Spare some change?

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    Word, the main melody, might be electric piano is a little high in the mix... the other melodies are good, add on to the chilled vibe... strings theat come in work well... all in all it's a hot beat, just need to lower the volume on the main instrument.
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  11. wmsproductions

    wmsproductions wms productions

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