"Ohh Baby" - Hilly, Endzwell, Mikey Bars

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  1. Endzwell

    Endzwell BlueMoon Records

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  2. Damaged Andy

    Damaged Andy New Member

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    this shit's slick. The last verse is ok.
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  3. Endzwell

    Endzwell BlueMoon Records

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    thanks man, up
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  4. Kdanger

    Kdanger The most Dangerous Game

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    This beat is fresh The lyrics are pretty good kinda westcoast kottonmouth with the weak weed references. Only criticizm i have is you guys all sound a bit similar... not bad but maybe when doing collab try to make sure the rhyme pattern switches up a bit i dont know just a little more variety with the flow is what im thinking great job though i def dig it.

    Peep this rough cut if you get time, 1st track from my mixtape

    http://rapmusic.com/threads/check-o...dback-sbtrtk-wildfire-ft-k-dangerous.1367479/
    Last edited: Jan 17, 2014
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