Oh, no need to panic, you just wait.

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  1. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    What do you see?

    I see...
    people sick and children starving,
    carefully selected false words of politicians,
    yeah, I see tons of salt for wounds,
    plenty money for the sellouts,
    the good ones aren't fighting anymore,
    they all are committed to the struggle,
    women raped leaving us mercyless,
    no signs of forgiveness,
    eye for an eye, tooth for tooth,
    everyone wants a bit higher,
    yet end up lying in the streets.

    I see...
    so much explosives,
    that a nation guilty of nothing,
    can 10 millions fold get erased from the map,
    people wrapped in sealed macabre,
    children gazing towards the future,
    which isn't theirs anymore,
    open wounds, blood in the nursery,
    blood on their fingers,
    people in lines waiting for rice,
    and it hurts.

    I see...
    time for heroic acts is long gone,
    and you think you're immune,
    oh, no need to panic, you just wait,
    you're not doing anything,
    just looking.
    waiting on someone to solve everything,
    stop gazing at the sky asking when it gets better.

    And when I look at people,
    I don't see myself in them anymore,
    don't know whether they're different,
    or am I the one that's left without a breath of life,
    I don't understand people anymore,
    this can't be me,
    everything I do, it changes me,
    as naive as it sounds,
    no one hears cries for help anymore,
    caring for others went on ignore,
    and there you go, waiting,
    for someone to solve everything,
    forgetting you're only looking,
    oh, no need to panic, you just wait.
    test
  2. Knowledge

    Knowledge 12 lbs with dick insert.

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    Beautiful.... will interrogate you tomorrow.... :funny:


    :winning:
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  3. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

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    ...looking forward to it...:funny:
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  4. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    This message is really played and though it is the truth, I felt you came across being deep but these issues are now on the collective mass conscious. And looked at with urgency rather than apathy. That said, this was taken to serious as these ideas and themes are mainstream....but that's just me.

    I really loved the way you completely changed your voice in the very last stanza...and it read the best out of the whole with new insights compared to the whole. This could stand alone, and probably be better for it



    And when I look at people,
    I don't see myself in them anymore,
    don't know whether they're different,
    or am I the one that's left without a breath of life,
    I don't understand people anymore,
    this can't be me,
    everything I do, it changes me,
    as naive as it sounds,
    no one hears cries for help anymore,
    caring for others went on ignore,
    and there you go, waiting,
    for someone to solve everything,
    forgetting you're only looking,
    oh, no need to panic, you just wait.
    test
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