*Official Video* Sleepwalker by Jakob22 Feedback always returned

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  1. Redhead

    Redhead PG County Representer

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    This isn't usually my type of rap music but this is dope! I like the video a lot with the transitions and the opacity changes
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  2. xMetasiNx

    xMetasiNx Met-uh-siN

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    I dug the video. Really nice for your first shoot. Shawn Phillips said he'd like a little more emphasis with your sound, and I'd have to say I agree. It's not that I don't like what you're doing with your flow. Obviously holding back a little so that your vocal works nicely with the beat and the overall vibe of the track, but I think you might have held back just a tad much. Vocals are a little low in certain places. That coupled with the lack of emphasis in certain spots made it hard to follow your message at times. Not a huge fan of the hook. It just didn't off-set the verse enough for me. Overall, be proud of the project as a whole, man. You did well.
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  3. DeathChamberz

    DeathChamberz From the Page to da stage

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    Yeah some of the mix aint perfect and we try different tones in vocal on different songs some work some don't thanks for listening

    Please check out the rest of the videos at Jakob22Music's channel - YouTube

    And Download Volume 1 and 2 of Dreamstate 4 Free @ Jakob22
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  4. flabbadabbadoo

    flabbadabbadoo Member

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    zsick tune and video bro, feeeling the flow man real nice!!!
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  5. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    This is basically what I've come to expect from Jakob22....dark beat, dark delivery..very polished. Knows what he's trying to do on a track...good shit as always. Cool video. Keep it up. 1
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  6. Loose Logic

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    could have sworn i fed this .. maybe somewhere else.. vid is nice.. quality is nice.. beat was a good choice..

    lyrics are good.. flow on point.. delivery is nice..
    hook is cool.. i dig it..

    btw. what camera u got. i need to get one.
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  7. BARS Beats

    BARS Beats New Member

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    I thought the song was nice, but not really my sort of thing. However I thought for the little amount of shots for the video, it actually turned out well! nice editing man.
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