~!O!~ 4-1 vs. Yung Impression 3-2

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  1. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Pacific
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.
    u must agree on an amount in ya check in
    & match whatever amount u agree on


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    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Everybody MUST vote on the champ matches!!
    And they do not count as part as your required 5 votes.

    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 8 votes wins the battle, & it'll be closed afterwards

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    u do, then u can't edit another verse in
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  2. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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  3. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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  4. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    I'll drop this lame..ya'll know that this kid is going down
    when I leave yung's impression..all over the ground//
    I bring the force till even Luke'll start feeling my mindwaves
    and cut you in half...so in ur casket u'll be sittin sideways//
    I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
    he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//
    this child tries to talk big shit. dropping lines about guns
    but from the way u act..
    we got the impression that kid was kinda yung//
    but 15?!?! grow the fuck up.don't play the grown game bitch
    wen u got more hair on ur eyebrows then on ur fucking dick//
    shit..I laugh at this kid when Toys R Us is still the place!
    plus Toys R Us...cause I will let my bullets play in ur face//
    I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
    when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//
    u're clean shaved with no elevation, stop faking shit bitch
    or u'll get my impression, wen the imp's pressing...straight 2 ur lips//

    ~....ha...ha...ha....now take all day child.~
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  5. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~..and oh yeah..don't feed off my verse bullet head..~
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  6. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    Half of ya wins are no shows. U tryna beat me, now I know u losin it
    I’ll “M.O.P” u all over the floor. like the crew signing wit G-unit
    I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
    Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin
    He say he get girls. U prolly dont fuck’em, but lets leave that alone
    Girls be screamin O’s name out. Yea because he have sex wit the tv on
    He tries to act hard. But I seen fam wit a gun, and that’s no lie
    tryin to see if his "fireworks". but my bad its the sound of 4th of July
    He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
    But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner
    U already prove to everybody that u wack. So wat gonna be ya other reason
    I heard that ~!O!~ can be ill sumtimes. Yea only during cold & flu season
    I can stop u from becoming a rapper. Mess up ya dreams & have u clanging
    Cuz I‘ll have u standin in front of ya goal. Like u was basket hanging
    Kid im not gonna take u serious. U think ya hood, bitch you finish
    Plus I’ll hit ya in the “Eye” hard. Like I was fucking hurricane Dennis


    i won bitch
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  7. XpOeT

    XpOeT no title needed

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    O verse breakdown-
    I'll drop this lame..ya'll know that this kid is going down
    when I leave yung's impression..all over the ground//
    not feelin how that was writttin

    I bring the force till even Luke'll start feeling my mindwaves
    and cut you in half...so in ur casket u'll be sittin sideways//
    weak

    I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
    he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//
    weak...

    this child tries to talk big shit. dropping lines about guns
    but from the way u act..
    we got the impression that kid was kinda yung//
    ehhh

    but 15?!?! grow the fuck up.don't play the grown game bitch
    wen u got more hair on ur eyebrows then on ur fucking dick//
    thats kinda gay...

    shit..I laugh at this kid when Toys R Us is still the place!
    plus Toys R Us...cause I will let my bullets play in ur face//
    ehhhh

    I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
    when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//
    weak

    u're clean shaved with no elevation, stop faking shit bitch
    or u'll get my impression, wen the imp's pressing...straight 2 ur lips//
    weak closer...

    YI breakdown-

    Half of ya wins are no shows. U tryna beat me, now I know u losin it
    I’ll “M.O.P” u all over the floor. like the crew signing wit G-unit
    ehhh

    I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
    Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin
    decent

    He say he get girls. U prolly dont fuck’em, but lets leave that alone
    Girls be screamin O’s name out. Yea because he have sex wit the tv on
    whack

    He tries to act hard. But I seen fam wit a gun, and that’s no lie
    tryin to see if his "fireworks". but my bad its the sound of 4th of July
    weak

    He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
    But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner
    ehhh

    U already prove to everybody that u wack. So wat gonna be ya other reason
    I heard that ~!O!~ can be ill sumtimes. Yea only during cold & flu season
    ok...u should have set it up as "flue & cold"flow would have been better

    I can stop u from becoming a rapper. Mess up ya dreams & have u clanging
    Cuz I‘ll have u standin in front of ya goal. Like u was basket hanging
    ...whack

    Kid im not gonna take u serious. U think ya hood, bitch you finish
    Plus I’ll hit ya in the “Eye” hard. Like I was fucking hurricane Dennis
    nothing special about this closer....

    vote- Yung cuz over all his verse was ok, while O came with nothing.
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  8. U-TuRn

    U-TuRn me vs you? thats funny

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    Allright, both of yall dropped pretty dope. Both had creative punches as well as onpoint presentation. Yungs verse was allright, while i was not feeling the closer because i have seen that type of punch on the site before. I like O's verse because he really attacked one facet of Yung, and that was his age. Yung brought to the table some punches that i do not think were countered while O seemed more consistent.

    Vote-O
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  9. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe Active Member

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    Half of ya wins are no shows. U tryna beat me, now I know u losin it
    I’ll “M.O.P” u all over the floor. like the crew signing wit G-unit
    ahhhh, no.....

    I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
    Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin
    ehhh, basic, but kinda ok...

    He say he get girls. U prolly dont fuck’em, but lets leave that alone
    Girls be screamin O’s name out. Yea because he have sex wit the tv on
    nah...

    He tries to act hard. But I seen fam wit a gun, and that’s no lie
    tryin to see if his "fireworks". but my bad its the sound of 4th of July
    nothin...

    He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
    But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner
    hockey rinks dont even have corners...

    U already prove to everybody that u wack. So wat gonna be ya other reason
    I heard that ~!O!~ can be ill sumtimes. Yea only during cold & flu season
    to basic...

    I can stop u from becoming a rapper. Mess up ya dreams & have u clanging
    Cuz I‘ll have u standin in front of ya goal. Like u was basket hanging
    cool...

    Kid im not gonna take u serious. U think ya hood, bitch you finish
    Plus I’ll hit ya in the “Eye” hard. Like I was fucking hurricane Dennis
    the eye of hurricanes are the softest part of the storm, bad wording...

    overall, i seen the angles you were takin, but nah
    alot of basic text, not much wit involved, bland verse
    ....

    I'll drop this lame..ya'll know that this kid is going down
    when I leave yung's impression..all over the ground//
    basic, to easy, but ok...

    I bring the force till even Luke'll start feeling my mindwaves
    and cut you in half...so in ur casket u'll be sittin sideways//
    nah...

    I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
    he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//
    nah...

    this child tries to talk big shit. dropping lines about guns
    but from the way u act..
    we got the impression that kid was kinda yung//
    nah...

    but 15?!?! grow the fuck up.don't play the grown game bitch
    wen u got more hair on ur eyebrows then on ur fucking dick//
    ok...

    shit..I laugh at this kid when Toys R Us is still the place!
    plus Toys R Us...cause I will let my bullets play in ur face//
    nah...

    I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
    when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//
    heh, cool, ok..

    u're clean shaved with no elevation, stop faking shit bitch
    or u'll get my impression, wen the imp's pressing...straight 2 ur lips//
    nah..


    you went for like 987398798596 name plays, most was jus ehhh
    same as YI, jus some ok shit





    overall, dissapointing battle
    i thought this was gonna be 1 of the better south battles this week, but it looks to be the most boring, sorry jus being honest
    imma vote- YI jus for the basketline & tryina think outta the box alil
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  10. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    2-1 im leading

    my verse...basic...lol aight..thanks for voting

    next week i'll be comin much better...fa sho
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  11. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~..2-1..up.~
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  12. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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  13. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    ~!O!~

    I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
    he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//


    I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
    when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//


    The dark line would been cool if his name had dark in it..and the bellies line could have been taken many ways....so either u swallow cum...or u swallow Yung..either way that sounds gay...IMO your verse was eh...at best

    Yung Impression

    I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
    Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin

    He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
    But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner

    Okay the first one was okay...sorta funny....the 2nd...well if Hockey was playign right now would be better and some might nto even get this line...unless they know sumthin abotu it..anyway

    IMO

    both didnt do much to impress me...and YI U have gotten better since I battled you..and the other guy...witht he funny sign LOL naw..this verse was eh...

    IMO My vote Yung Impression (props)
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  14. marsellus

    marsellus nOne siCker

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    flow - O
    mets - young
    creativity - O
    punches - tie

    vote - O
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  15. CONCOUYS

    CONCOUYS CONSCYOUS

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    yo i like both verses and i couldn't pick

    qwite youngs did seem just // that munch better


    vote young impression
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  16. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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  17. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~..I almost can't believe I'm gonna lose this battle..but then again..wow....just...wow. 4-2.~
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  18. trey

    trey The Three Ball

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    I'll drop this lame..ya'll know that this kid is going down
    when I leave yung's impression..all over the ground//

    dope, easy...unforced and worked nice

    I bring the force till even Luke'll start feeling my mindwaves
    and cut you in half...so in ur casket u'll be sittin sideways//

    wack

    I leave ur kind blazed..pussy. a snitch that's known to narc
    he's black as fuck! I'm not a kid...so whose afraid of the dark?//

    wack

    this child tries to talk big shit. dropping lines about guns
    but from the way u act..
    we got the impression that kid was kinda yung//
    but 15?!?! grow the fuck up.don't play the grown game bitch
    wen u got more hair on ur eyebrows then on ur fucking dick//

    set up was good and u didnt do anything with it

    shit..I laugh at this kid when Toys R Us is still the place!
    plus Toys R Us...cause I will let my bullets play in ur face//

    no

    I guess me and Iron Mike got alot in common dun
    when he's known 2 eat ur kids...and my bellies full of yung//

    terrible, stop swallowing

    u're clean shaved with no elevation, stop faking shit bitch
    or u'll get my impression, wen the imp's pressing...straight 2 ur lips//

    sounds terrible

    stop with the name flips, 1 is enough or too many



    Half of ya wins are no shows. U tryna beat me, now I know u losin it
    I’ll “M.O.P” u all over the floor. like the crew signing wit G-unit

    no

    I seen ~!O!~‘s girl. And she’s a heffer, kid there ain‘t no flossin
    Cuz when she walk the street. Theres warning signs sayin Cattle crossin


    a heffer? sucha bad word MFdoom wouldnt even say it, sounds like something that would be in a live battle not some text verse

    He say he get girls. U prolly dont fuck’em, but lets leave that alone
    Girls be screamin O’s name out. Yea because he have sex wit the tv on

    no, terrible

    He tries to act hard. But I seen fam wit a gun, and that’s no lie
    tryin to see if his "fireworks". but my bad its the sound of 4th of July

    wordplay with no diss at all

    He have women tho. He be teach'em new shit like they was a foreigner
    But his girls are prostitutes & more like hockey. Gettin rammed in every corner

    no

    U already prove to everybody that u wack. So wat gonna be ya other reason
    I heard that ~!O!~ can be ill sumtimes. Yea only during cold & flu season

    this is one step up from a cum line

    I can stop u from becoming a rapper. Mess up ya dreams & have u clanging
    Cuz I‘ll have u standin in front of ya goal. Like u was basket hanging

    youre going to have him clanging?

    Kid im not gonna take u serious. U think ya hood, bitch you finish
    Plus I’ll hit ya in the “Eye” hard. Like I was fucking hurricane Dennis

    wack




    Vote = O
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  19. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~..4-3..uppin'.~
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  20. ~!O!~

    ~!O!~ ...I'll spank u...

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    ~..4-3 Yung..uppin'.~
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