NW: 4. TekneeK vs. 13. J-Nyce

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  1. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    All rules that are applied in the league will also be enforced for regulating the tournament. If you're not familiar with the rules of the RSTL, please read them HERE!:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=876433

    The only difference will be that in this tournament, your opponent will get to pick your topic for you. Topics must be picked and posted within the match thread within 1 day. If it's not posted, the opponent of the person that didn't pick a topic in time will get to choose his/her own topic.

    One more additional rule and this one is crucial so you all need to be aware of this. If you do not vote, you will not advance in the tournament at all. I don't care how many votes you're winning by, you will need to vote to advance on 4 matches weekly. When the league re-opens, these 4 matches will include voting on league matches. And in the elite 8 before the league reopens, there will be only 3 matches to vote on. That will be the only exception, but all 3 matches will require your vote. Voting matches a tie will not be permitted and won't count as a vote.

    Topics will be up Tuesday 12am PST every week and topical choices are due Wednesday 12am PST and verses are due Sunday 12am PST, 3am EST, 8am Greenwich with votes due Tuesday 12 am PST, 3am EST, 8am Greenwich

    Also, there will be no recycling allowed. Nothing you've ever posted anywhere online will be allowed. The mods will be checking verses for authenticity with online search engines.

    This is a match by match tournament so there will probably be no show wins and losses.

    Topics Are HERE!: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1030432

    Lets Get Ready To Ruuuuuuuummmmmmmbbbbbbbbbllllllleeeeeeeeee!​
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  2. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    u ain shit son...
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  3. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    ur bitchass can rock this topic:

    On the way down




    it fits u perfectly ..... wack ass mufucka...
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  4. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    In the blink of an eye




    My 1st birthday

    I can barely remember,
    Mama said my day was the 3rd of December
    It’s my moment to enter …. And my mindstate is clueless
    An infant, in tears and I’m toothless..
    She said life is ruthless … The rays of the sun pierce the window
    I close my eyes in the blink of an eye…

    And the rays shine again… but now I’m grownup at 10
    I see 3rd grade… kids all around me… they laughin’
    My moment to see.. then I look to the window..
    Again… but this time I get what she said…
    There’s been a time in the darkness.. during peace and pain
    I experienced loss and included the gain
    To remain… a child of a realm filled with wonder
    The sun… the clouds…the rain.. the thunder
    I blink… and then I realize once more
    I see the rays of the sun pierce the wood of my door..

    I blink…

    The years have gone even further
    But in this time, I’ve inclined in understanding..
    Poetically, things have changed and I’ve gained
    The self-identity in defining my name
    So then with all I failed to understand
    From my birth.. to now… I stand..
    And here I speak with my pencil, touching this paper..
    From my heart, to my thoughts it releases in hand:

    Paint the picture when in focus, the colors’ appeared
    And the first time I open em, I can see clear
    All the things that are present and are shown so before me
    I stand there suspended and let life come explore me
    I envision the scene, I live in the radiance
    The beam has obtained me from its source to the gradients
    My life moves… but the blink of an eye
    Reminds all that a second has already gone by….
    When you blink for a moment.. that moment has died
    When you open up your eyes, it has lingered on by
    So when we grow old and retract the moments we missed
    From the eyes that we closed, it’s been sent to its bliss
    A kiss..

    Can make that moment be forever..
    With our eyes when it closes… we still will remember
    The leaves will grow yellow and detach from the branch
    But in heart, you can see them still blossom and dance
    The awesome enhancement to change life and its structure
    The time… the moment… the ceasing of closure
    In the blink of an eye… how long will you pause
    When the lids close for long to see effects from its cause
    Let the sun remain shining thru your window of life
    With the vision to gain when you turn from your sights
    It provides…

    A simple way to convince you
    In the blink of an eye…

    No time will ever miss you.
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  5. On The Way Down -

    The joy that's known for brighting skies, hopeful lighting eyes
    Anticipation is a must, I carry on despite demise - all my life has been lies,
    The way up is far to reach - And now adays I scream so much, that's it's even hard to speak
    Sometimes I hardly seek - another way to change progression,
    In consideration that maybe these are only life's lessons...
    But lessons without teachers? No pupils beside me,
    Hooked on that poison ivy, got me hooked to an I.V.
    Morphine pumping with my family beside me.. I know somebody else been through this burden besides me,
    Before I reach the top, I usually fall with the best of them,
    A society grown up on pop shows and wrestling - I'm yet to find the testament...
    But I know God's watching - it's death now or later, and I'm questioning my options..
    When snowstorms come, the hail comes even harder
    I know Hell isn't much farther - the life as a Martyr,
    A false idol. Communist thinking,
    Is the street code - cuz know adays anyone's left stinking!
    I never got up, I stayed down when I finally made that,
    And hit the ground so hard, I pushed a Tsunami into my wave cap.
    So some would say that.. I never ever stood a chance
    A young recluse. Prom time, and you forgot to dance
    But that black suit's for ya coffin, you only need a change of pants.
    This is the reality, the divine thoughts of the civil
    The undivine as well, but we dwell on that just a little
    From the bone to the gristle - feasting on life's organs
    Plus the Way Down usually feels so much worse in the morning..
    I'm mourning, and a Sprite and Tylenol aren't my ups
    No head aches, just an aching head from not waking up -
    In time, for me to manifest my destiny's fulfillment
    Try to be Super man - without leaping those tall buildings!
    So when I touch ground, just know it's done at bursting speeds
    And I tried to grow from it... but I ain't have no working seeds!
    And the way up is usually a trivial moment of clarity,
    And actually getting their to the top is simply a rarity.
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  6. lol @ all the shit tek talkin before he posted

    and now u losing round 1
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  7. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    ur late u dumbass... look at the due date......


    fuckin herb...



    made me waste a verse...punkass..
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  8. Topics will be up Tuesday 12am PST every week and topical choices are due Wednesday 12am PST and verses are due Sunday 12am PST, 3am EST, 8am Greenwich with votes due Tuesday 12 am PST, 3am EST, 8am Greenwich

    u chose the topical before wednesday

    i posted on time

    im on the west coast

    he didn't even include that time frame

    and it's only barely 11 a.m here

    u lost

    stop trying to make an excuse to get past the first round
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  9. lol @ tekgeek

    fuckin loser

    uppin for votes
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  10. _millz_

    _millz_ New Member

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    you posted at like 9 am your time dude..........and thats like 9 hours late......so if he accepts your verse ill drop a vote...if not better luck next time
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  11. it's not his choice to accept my verse u fuckin clown

    this is a tourney

    im sure dic doesn't want any no-shows, nevertheless wins by no-show when the opponent is willing and has posted

    tekneek is just bitching up cuz he realizes he's gonna lose now

    if i dropped something wack, he'd accept it and get his win but that's not the case

    if ur so good and better than me tek, why are u scared to let this battle ride out? fuckin clown
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  12. _millz_

    _millz_ New Member

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    when i said he i was referring to tali or dic
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  13. wow @ this clown editing his topical

    fuckin cheater
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  14. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    I'm granting a 24 hour extension to all verses so Tek if you want to edit or modify your verse, please do.

    Cant have a tournament if over half the people no show man. Sorry for the inconvenience, but I hope you understand
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  16. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    J-Nyce is a lil bitch... needs a fuckin extension to get his validated.. i dont need to change shit for some bitch like him...

    fuck u J-herb...

    u aint shit...
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  17. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    LET ME NOTATE HOW MUCH OF A BITCH U ARE....

    u showed up late....

    u broke the fuckin rule...

    before dic changed to have the extension IN NORMAL CASES verses are due on Sat Night.... u showed late.... 9 hours late as noted..

    u think i fuckin fear u? --


    get fuckin real .....

    the only fuckin reason u posted late is cus u were riding on the chance that no-shows would be overwhelming in the 1st round... so u rode the wave too..


    if anyone u the bitch...


    fuck u clown.. u got exposed.
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  18. _millz_

    _millz_ New Member

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    hmmm....tekneek...you started out soooooooooooo slow to me...it toook you a good while to get the story moving in a good direction...some parts came off well thought out and some parts seemed to be lacking..overall this was ok

    vs...

    blues clues...........this was aite...good wording on a lot of things...and steady solid read...only problems i follow are story development and content..this really doesnt say much to me....a more thought out story and uniqueness is key in my opinion

    overall...i just thought that teks piece was not as polished as his oppenents verse....blues came off as the better writer here.....mediocre battle to me...good luck to the both of yas

    vote- j-nyce
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  19. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    Tek - this was an obscure piece with an obscure ending...there was a sloppy connection amongst the images and you picked almost random events and didn't really tie them in properly...your eye closes in the blink of an eye? ... what were you thinking when you wrote that line... I unno...this piece aggravated me...

    J-nyce - while your rhyming was pretty solid, this piece didn't go anywhere...it wasn't much for a topical...definitely wasn't a story either...just a "blah" verse...all in all, after I was done reading it I had to re-read it because it was just the kind of verse that you read and don't remember anything about it.

    vote = Tek, while his verse was more obscure it had a more concise approach and had more substance.
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  20. SacriFICE

    SacriFICE TRUspeak

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    Vote: Tekneek

    I agree with Got Life on this one. J-Nyce's piece lacked soo much for me... could tell it was a "keystyle" in 15 minutes. Just didn't hit home at all, seemed to lack substance and development, and even the rhyming wasn't that great. Just wasn't a good verse in my opinion, by any means.

    Tekneek however, didn't rhyme particularly well, as he doesn't usually. But the verse was much better in the development department, more profound in some aspects, and generally just was a more impessive read overall. Niether verses are winning material in this tournament by any means... Whoever wins would have to step it up a whole lot to even have a chance.

    Vote: Tekneek
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