NUMBER ONE CONTENDERSHIP: 3. Dough Jordan 9-0 vs. 4. I. Deal 17-3

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  1. Deadly Weapon

    Deadly Weapon Fuck off

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    let it be known i didnt look at none of the votes..


    Lets go, old man....


    Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
    One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.
    ok nameplay. but im sure shit like this been used on him over n over since i used somethin similar months ago on him,i aint hatin, just aint diggin the punch that much

    It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
    So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.
    aight, this nameplay was hot.

    & talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
    I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.
    ha.

    Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
    You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.
    wheres the pic? i seen his pic awhile ago but dont really recall..ok punch though

    Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
    You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.
    blah,blah,lost heat dunn

    & while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
    The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.
    no,no,no,played to death

    See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
    Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.
    oh,oh,ohhhhh,nice

    Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
    Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.
    blah,jay-z dont spit hot lines anyway, he just got killa style

    Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
    U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.
    ok nameplay, not that creative though

    Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
    & start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week
    nice closer,wordplay,execution...


    im not lookin at the pic since i didnt see doughs pic in this



    pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
    yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/
    ok,straight forward punch,nice execution,nothin spectacular,but still effective

    ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
    this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/
    ehhh....not really feeling

    I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
    not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/
    hmmm..ok i guess.....simple but to the point.

    we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
    he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/
    hahahahahahahhahahahahahaha

    edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
    Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/
    aint heard it fliped before, nice execution,good line

    now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
    knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/
    hmmm...ok

    look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
    everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/
    ha.

    I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
    evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the jeweler/
    ehhh...no

    thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
    I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/
    oh shit, i liked that.

    understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
    and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/
    nice

    man i was expectin more from both, Tang i u had this match,but a couple lines killed ya. Dough was more up forward with his punchlines, i read both verses twice an to me his executio was more on point. If u wouldve replaced a line or two with a dope one i could see u takin this in MY opinion. Anyways im voting.

    DOUGH
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  2. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    im voting, and it counts, why? because im DH

    v/ Dough

    I dont see why people are voting for Tang to be honest, no disrespect cause both of yall are better than me, but Dough got this....easily

    Battle overall was good, dough's verse was just....better. Better flow, punches, and overall appeal. Tang had some hot quotables, but dough had more.

    It came down to consistency, and Dough got it with that said.

    v/ dough
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  3. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    This was one dope ass battle...great shit from both guys here but theres one obvious victor in my eyes...

    ideal - u used chin and dough lines...but damnnnnnn they were the best flips ive ever seen...lol...dope shit..the heriditary line was sickk..and then that 'smell what the rock is cooking'...holy shit..thats one of the best lines i think ive ever seen...line of the battle...
    a few of your lines were a bit played...the draw a gun line and your closer has been done many times in many different forms...still...great verse...

    dough - another great verse...your opener was siiiick...the skinny lines were coo'...hand that feeds you was dope...other shits was a lil played....cuervo line was tight....the rest wasnt quite hitting the target though....not like i.deal...nice verse though...sooooo

    vote = i.deal....pretty easily here

    good shit fellas..
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  4. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    WOW


    is this ever close.
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  5. AlphaOmni

    AlphaOmni Registered Drug User

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    well damn..


    i think Sinseer really got this one, although obviously dough had some nice shit

    i liked the personals more from sin, a bit more original but the one mic line from dough was tight..


    both brought heat, everything has been quoted. this was dope, but it goes to tang for the relentless assault. from the getgo a dope verse, pretty well rounded and mean. dough had a few nice sequences also, but not quite enough.


    vote-tang

    nice match

    pz



    btw, its rivers
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  6. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    damn........seems like people either thought tang won easily or I won easily......this was the closest battle I've been a part of in a long time......much respect tang, u defnitely did the damn thing
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  7. Anaphora

    Anaphora was here

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    Ideal:
    Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
    One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.
    -nice multi's, not funny, but a nice opener.

    It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
    So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.
    -This was pretty sick, still got the ill multi's going.

    & talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
    I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.
    -I thought this was fucking hilarious.
    Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
    You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.
    -follows up with the last bar.

    Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
    You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.
    -Ehh... compared to the other shit this was kinda plain, good if he talks about guns all the time I guess, but I don't know...

    & while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
    The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.
    -same as above.

    See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
    Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.
    -This was good.

    Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
    Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.
    -Hahaha, nice.

    Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
    U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.
    -Haha, gotta love child molestation.

    Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
    & start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.
    -Sick closer.


    JD:
    pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
    yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/
    -Haha, nice opener.

    ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
    this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/
    -This was decent.

    I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
    not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/
    -Nice.

    we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
    he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/
    -Hahaha, this was real nice.

    edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
    Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/
    -Prretty good.

    now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
    knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/
    -Ehh... this was ok.

    look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
    everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/
    -same as above, kinda funny.

    I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
    evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the jeweler/
    -? Didn't get this one I guess...

    thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
    I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/
    -This was pretty funny, would've been better with bacardi (151) or everclear, but hey, whatcha gonna do.

    understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
    and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/
    -Pretty good closer too...

    This was definitely the best match I've read here yet... both had some really good lines, I fuckin cracked up at ideal's long face line. haha Great job guys.

    Vote: I.Deal.
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  8. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    I.deal -
    Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
    One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.
    ok nameplay...
    It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
    So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.
    this nameplay wuz better...
    & talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
    I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.
    coo...
    Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
    You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.
    heh...
    Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
    You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.
    ok...
    & while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
    The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.
    lolz...
    See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
    Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.
    dope...
    Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
    Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.
    ehh...
    Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
    U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.
    ok nameplay...
    Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
    & start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.
    already seen it before...



    Dough Jordan
    pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
    yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/
    played...plus my line wuz better 2 years ago...
    ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
    this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/
    ok...
    I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
    not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/
    coo...
    we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
    he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/
    dope...
    edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
    Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/
    coo but setup coulda been better...
    now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
    knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/
    nah...
    look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
    everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/
    ehh...
    I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
    evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the jeweler/
    no punch here...
    thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
    I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/
    ok...simple but effective...
    understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
    and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/
    ok closer...



    overall -
    ideal had 4 really good lines in his verse...focused a few on nameplays so tha rest of his lines kinda got tirin...rock is cookin and art teacher were his best lines...dough had 3 good lines (1 of em wit a bad setup tho)...his best wuz tha bite tha hand line...his opener wuz played and he also wasted a couplet by havin no punch in it (jacob line)...therefore...for havin a few more better punches than dough...my vote goes to...


    vote=ideal

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  9. DYNASTY

    DYNASTY The Last Of The Best

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    Tang's High lights.

    Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
    One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.

    & talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
    I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.

    Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
    You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.

    See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
    Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.

    Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
    U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.


    Dough's High lights.

    I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
    not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/

    we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
    he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/

    now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
    knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/

    I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
    evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the jeweler/

    understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
    and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/


    This battle was hard to vote on, Best battle i seen in awhile
    in the RBL ..but my vote goes to Dough, i like his witty lines
    & its smooth.

    Vote - Dough
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  10. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    vote - Dough


    was more consistantly entertaining...Tang went up and down a lot with the shit i was feeling, but still came correct...both guys had some real ILL shit...but dough seemed focused on coming more direct and raw with the way he worded his shit....tang had line of the battle, but also was less consistent...tough call for me, but i had to give it to Dough cuz he seemed like he wanted the win more.
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  11. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    To me, this battle definately lived up to the hype...

    I.deal:
    Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
    One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.
    ----coo flip
    It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
    So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.
    ----dope
    & talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
    I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.
    ----haha
    Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
    You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.
    ----decent
    Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
    You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.
    ----nice, i love these kinda punches
    & while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
    The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.
    ----ehh, kinda played
    See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
    Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.
    ----pretty nice
    Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
    Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.
    ----ehh, ok
    Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
    U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.
    ----played, shouldnt'a used 2 dough punches
    Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
    & start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.
    ----lol, nice closer

    Dough:
    pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
    yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/
    ----ohhh.. a little played, but dope flip
    ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
    this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/
    ----blah
    I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
    not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/
    ----ok
    we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
    he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/
    ----lol, nice
    edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
    Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/
    ----haha
    now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
    knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/
    ----oh shit, dope pic diss
    look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
    everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/
    ----heh, ok
    I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
    evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the jeweler/
    ----nah
    thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
    I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/
    ----ok
    understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
    and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/
    ----haha, good closer

    This was real close. Both had lots of personals, a couple that were weak.. they were pretty even. Both were consistent. I think Ideal was more creative though, had a couple more lines i was feelin. His verse seemed like it was overall harder hitting. DOPE battle, definately my fav of the week.

    Vote: Ideal
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  12. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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  13. -Prospect-

    -Prospect- AKA LEE

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    very dope battle..

    Vote: I. Deal

    I. Deal- overall i felt your verse was nice as hell. had some dope punches and it flowed nicely. it all came together well and overall i was just feeling it more. it kept me interested all the way through. you had some nice personals.

    Dough- dope verse also. you also had some nice punches and peronals but when it comes down to the end, i wasnt feelin it as much as I. Deals. his verse just caught my eye more. but none the less. great battle. im out. pz
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  14. Macabre

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    Lines I didn't like by Deal
    & talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
    I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.


    everyone seems to like this, but it was a little too simple for my tastes.

    & while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
    The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.


    Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
    U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.
    Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
    & start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.


    Overall: Really liked his verse, a few jabs that hit Dough between your fire lines. Really nice verse. Wasn't really feelin the name flips or chin diss though, but the opener seemed fresh so I wouldn't write it off.

    John Dough Jordan's lines I didn't like
    pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
    yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/


    seen em

    I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
    evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the jeweler/


    I liked this, but it didn't really work in this battle. Audio maybe.

    Overall: I really liked Dough's verse too lol. I tried to avoid this battle cause it was too close, but Dough's verse appealed to me more after reading it again. I liked the gain weight line the most out of the battle, with Tang's rock line 2nd. I won't say Dough came better than Tang in any particular area really, but I thought his weaker lines were a little stronger than Deal's weaker lines. So appeal + better filler =

    V- Dough


    It could go either way.
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  15. BiggRic

    BiggRic Doin Bigg Thangs

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    I Deal

    Whenever I touch a piece of paper, I combust & beat a hater.
    One shot'll leave Dough splattered in red.. like a fuckin pizzamaker.

    that was aight..
    It aint nuthin for me to slay ya. But I blaze too much to think.
    So imma splatter JD on the streets, like I had way too much to drink.

    Nice..
    & talk about depression. The state of this kid is hella scary.
    I asked him "why the long face?"...... He said that shit is hereditary.

    lol.. aight
    Bitch you could neva tear me. Your hideous, and my hunches are
    You probably wish your fuckin face was as plain as your punches are.

    ehh that was ok
    Now you think ur a fuckin thug? I oughtta son you for jockin
    You can talk about guns all you want... I let my guns do the talkin.

    decent turn around
    & while we on topic, i dont really believe you hard neither
    The only person to ever see you draw a gun was your art teacher.

    kinda blah there homie
    See, Dough wrestle wit drug addiction. Always walkin crooked.
    Id punch his nose in his brain, but he'd smell what the rock is cookin.

    lol good one
    Tang'll snuff you while cops is lookin, and if you hate me? fine
    Spit whatever you want.... I can handle a badly flipped jay-z line.

    aight
    Id blame his parents. Johns's childhood was all fuckin sex
    U'd think his Dad was a baker how Dough got tossed up 'n stretched.

    lol, that was ILLL
    Im the awesomest left. So you can forget all this text, geek
    & start callin me castaway... Since its just me & an Island next week.

    ILL as closer duke.... I was like daaaammnnnn...


    JD

    pics are worth a thousand words and tho winnen this is lovely../
    yours is worth about 40 cuz I ran outta synonyms for ugly/

    kinda played
    ur bars are pussy so ur far from causing linear harm/
    this kid looks like nick cannon, just with skinnier arms/

    lol, this was aight
    I do this for fun but to Tang its clear text is a hustle/
    not sure whats weaker, that verse or u flexin ya muscle/

    decent line kinda funny
    we win at about the same rate but u wack, I'm plain great/
    he tried to bite the hand that feeds him, just to gain weight/

    didnt really like this one
    edit ur verse like last week, I'll give u one chance more/
    Tang slacks so much he could open a chain of pants stores/

    nope
    now back to ur pic, its about time u get over the lies/
    knows he cant see me so he kept that hat over his eyes/

    hehe this one was cool
    look at the crowd's faces in ur pic, it's bug when/
    everyone but u realized ur mic wasn't plugged in/

    LOL that was nice
    I'm dope, dont need lies ta make up or fool ya/
    evidence wise, I got more links than jacob the jeweler/

    kinda blah
    thing is Tang's wack, dont gotta doubt the witness/
    I got enuff proof to put cuervo and henny outta business/

    LOL good one
    understand fam that there's nobody sick as me/
    and I'll show u a liar if u show me someone who disagree/

    ILL...that was tight.

    I thought overall this was a great battle. I thought it was tight and whack that dough used a pick in a way. I mean you would expect nothing less than that from him.... I thought that this battle was really hard to judge. Both had ILL closings and stayed fairly consistant throughout the verse. I thought that Ideal had a better verse though. I mean to me it was more entertaining and he clowned hella hard on a few of his lines. Dough tried to come back with the skinny shit based of the pick but he just didnt come back ill enough...

    Noone really deserves to lose this battle.... but overall

    Vote=Ideal
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  16. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    for my sake later


    the battle so far

    is I deal 10, John Dough 7

    20 minutes to go fellers
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    Mr.Perfect New Member

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