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  1. NOBLE SOLDIER

    NOBLE SOLDIER Fireball Kid

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    less of you cats can confront me
    stunt and then want conforting...
    dust in my wake, shake when i walk..
    a human quake, just from the words i talk..
    if your a lock, im a key.. i open all doors..
    im a bull with the best record.
    lock down defense with the best scores.
    i stand at the shores, challenging the oceans..
    while the rest of you cowards shatter with weak emotions..
    i may not be the best.. but i'll challenge who is...
    walking my own path while stepping on all nuisances..
    a killer instinct, i leave none alive who cross my path..
    the last thing anyone wants is to feel my wrath..
    just use the math, the numbers i've killed..
    not just skilled, but aspiring an empire to build..
    kneel beneath me and beg for mercy, still wont matter..
    because all those in my way become nothing but blood to splatter..
    only my true homies belong by my side..
    they know who they are and are along for the ride..
    I shatter hopes of those who wish to become better..
    this is just a warning.. quit now if you wish to live.. End of letter..
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  2. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    Ruthless 'till the end.
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  3. JiHaD210

    JiHaD210 REAL RECOGNIZE REAL

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    did you mean to put "not tilted" in the subject line?

    not a bad drop.. better than the other garbage I see
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  4. K KiLL

    K KiLL KiLLaH 203 Project

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    shit was str8 keep doing what you do
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  5. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    nice lyrics ma boi,



    ''im a bull with the best record.
    lock down defense with the best scores.
    i stand at the shores, challenging the oceans..
    while the rest of you cowards shatter with weak emotions..
    i may not be the best.. but i'll challenge who is...
    walking my own path while stepping on all nuisances..
    a killer instinct, i leave none alive who cross my path..
    the last thing anyone wants is to feel my wrath..
    just use the math, the numbers i've killed..
    not just skilled, but aspiring an empire to build..''
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  6. NOBLE SOLDIER

    NOBLE SOLDIER Fireball Kid

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    appreciate it fam..

    anyone down for a collab?
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  7. JiHaD210

    JiHaD210 REAL RECOGNIZE REAL

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    Im dwn Noble... been wantin to get down on sumthn
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  8. ComptonRiLLO

    ComptonRiLLO New Member

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    this is a good read right here. you caught my attention. i was breezing over the threads and i read your opening lines and i was like, ok.. let me see what he working with.
    your flow is on point. you can use a little more rhyme scheme in there. like i learned that from eminem. he goes back and re-writes verses and adds more rhymes into his flow. he does it like 4-7 times. but other then that its a solid flow, and you speak the real. your not just spitting bullshit. good shit fam.
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  9. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I liked everything about this execpt that line...the end rhymes did not fit the rest cos it seemed to stop the flow for me. great drop.
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