North: 1. Island vs 16. Parallel

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  1. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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    The RBL Tourney Rules and Regulations

    Basically the same as the Regular RBL for these first 2 weeks.

    Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
    No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
    Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

    -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
    -VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY, 10pm EASTERN

    -You MUST vote on 6 battles for the first 2 weeks & EDIT the vote links
    in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
    deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
    line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over


    -NO EDITING your verse AFTER BOTH verses have been posted. EDITING your post after both rhymes have been posted will result in an immediate DQ. Dont matter if your editing spelling or a fucking PERIOD. Its a DQ. No Questions Asked.


    -NO 1 Sentence Voting


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  2. Island

    Island Guest

    what say we go 16-20


    you pick
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  3. ..Parallel..

    ..Parallel.. New Member

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    yeah thats cool 20 max..16 min
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  4. Island

    Island I-LAND

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    Island's here...now to split up and divide this queer
    cuz the time is near........until you showed up...now it hides in fear
    this a breeze thru now...trust me, there won't be 2 rounds
    the only deliberation...is as to which part of Island just beat you down
    this is a free cause for debating...whoever said he's smart is relating
    ...cuz he heard Islands split in two...and looked up DR and Haiti
    no ones even heard this dude to flow...he'll get merked n lose his throat
    i only used that last line...to make sure i get serge and supers vote
    we all know you cant fight...so start racing to the door
    cuz cmon...muhfucka got his name from his relation to the floor
    you can be suicidal off a roof. No one'll be sharin' goodbyes
    and police aint gon bother u, faggot..cuz legends say fairies can fly
    fucka, i got mafioso connects.. so stop with ya gay tricks
    1 phone call will make u dissappear like the Matrix
    KILLED EM. Get a body bag for this blundering bastid
    now ya License aint the only time ya face is covered in plastic
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  5. ..Parallel..

    ..Parallel.. New Member

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    Drawn in sixteenth, But that doesn’t bother or fuckin’ upset me.
    ‘Cause being number one seed means you nothin’ but a wet dream.
    Threaten me? C’mon dog you mustn’t get caught in beliefs…‘Cause.
    If home is where the heart is, Your organs gon’ be walking the streets.
    Torching this geek, You better behave and not display brave instinct.
    Or you’ll wish I never found Island like the slave trade victims.
    Aim to kill him, Son on some wack shit so ain’t no way he can stress me.
    We in the North bracket, You ain’t making it to see no East-West beef.
    You best believe. You really ain’t living up to ya name.
    So I’ma drown you in the ocean, Maybe it’ll bring ‘Island’ some fame.
    Try and refrain, From droppin’ verses with so many punctual inferiors.
    This menopausal pussy needs to borrow a couple of my periods.
    Serious, You been fooled once then twice, Kids wits are long gone.
    Think I can’t pull one over you? You’re wrong, Every dick fits a condom.
    Balls? You ain’t got none. Fuckin’ cock was gonna get ruffed up as an example.
    Then I had second thoughts, ‘Cause I know faggots like to be manhandled.
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  6. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    har, nice nice.

    this doesnt seem like a #1 vs #16. mis-ranking right here.


    buuuuut, user still got u my friend. line for line, his was stronger and more creative, and he set the entire verse up a lot smoother. im surprised he pulled off a matrix line even after so long and still be original.. nice. its the best one ive seen since my "run circles around u like the matrix cameras" [licku] parallel had some good concepts too like that atlantis line but one or two weak lines (like the closer) and little things like that cost him, imo.

    [edit] v/ ISLAND. HAPPY NOW?!?!?!??


    [sQ]
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  7. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    thats v/ island, plz


    thx
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  8. Savir

    Savir ...

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    Island...

    this is a free cause for debating...whoever said he's smart is relating
    ...cuz he heard Islands split in two...and looked up DR and Haiti
    we all know you cant fight...so start racing to the door
    cuz cmon...muhfucka got his name from his relation to the floor
    KILLED EM. Get a body bag for this blundering bastid
    now ya License aint the only time ya face is covered in plastic

    ^^^^floor line was dope like whoa, the other two were ok

    you can be suicidal off a roof. No one'll be sharin' goodbyes
    and police aint gon bother u, faggot..cuz legends say fairies can fly
    fucka, i got mafioso connects.. so stop with ya gay tricks
    1 phone call will make u dissappear like the Matrix

    ^^^
    On the other hand, these sucked.

    time is near had potential, but came out extremely bland.




    Parallel..

    Threaten me? C’mon dog you mustn’t get caught in beliefs…‘Cause.
    If home is where the heart is, Your organs gon’ be walking the streets.
    Torching this geek, You better behave and not display brave instinct.
    Or you’ll wish I never found Island like the slave trade victims.

    ^^^^
    Good, but after that, you went downhill


    Try and refrain, From droppin’ verses with so many punctual inferiors.
    This menopausal pussy needs to borrow a couple of my periods.
    Serious, You been fooled once then twice, Kids wits are long gone.
    Think I can’t pull one over you? You’re wrong, Every dick fits a condom.
    Balls? You ain’t got none. Fuckin’ cock was gonna get ruffed up as an example.
    Then I had second thoughts, ‘Cause I know faggots like to be manhandled.
    ^^^^^

    eww....no good.


    V.Island
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  9. Tang.

    Tang. The One & Only.

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    vote island


    good show old chap, you pulled this one out by a slim margin



    parallel was pretty nice for a 16 seed, but his bars were a bit long, and his concepts werent as frushhh


    hollalujah
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  10. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    Threaten me? C’mon dog you mustn’t get caught in beliefs…‘Cause.
    If home is where the heart is, Your organs gon’ be walking the streets.
    Torching this geek, You better behave and not display brave instinct.
    Or you’ll wish I never found Island like the slave trade victims.

    parallel surprised me with those lines


    but island was just too brutal and consistent

    V- User
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  11. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    again,

    that's v - Island, plz
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  12. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    good battle

    but i gotta go wit Island here...the parallel line was dope

    more creativity...verse flowed perfect...just hit a lil harder in my opinion

    Parallel also had a nice verse...but it was not enough to take it

    Vote-Island
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  13. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote - Island


    more qoutes, more everything

    when i first read his verse, im thinking all flow, no puns, but Island drop that fiyahhhhh

    umm

    Parrallel, a couple of nameplays were aight, that one about island and fame was ehh

    but real decent verse
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  14. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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    this is strange.
    every other battle i've seen from parallel wasn't even close as good as this verse, which is why i placed him 16. oh well.

    great verse parallel. pce.
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  15. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    my vote Island...

    Parallel u came nice though for beign 16...and trap would have made u a better seed by seeing this....

    your island name flips was cool...thr organs in the streets line was nice...

    bu Island..came with that parallel to the floor or what not..best lien of the battle...

    good battle..
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  16. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    Parallel came a lot better than the previous verses i've read from him. Had some nice lines, surprised me. But, still not enough to overtake Island. Floor line was dope. Serge/Super line made me chuckle, tight verse as always.

    vote = Island
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  17. ..Parallel..

    ..Parallel.. New Member

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    Cool...Nice verse Island....Good luck with later rounds.
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  18. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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  20. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    vote Aloe or User
    so dont bother to post vote Island plz

    had the better verse, not most impressive outing though the beginning part was very nice, the I only used the line to get Serge & sooper's vote had me rolling, Prallele wasnt that bad until the 2nd half of his verse which wasa very bad
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