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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by e'S, Jun 15, 2003.

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  1. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    vocalize
    thought turn to streams to flow with
    harmonize
    brain patterns begin to function as moving cells
    solemnize
    eyes close only to see something other than real
    summarize
    is the sun in my view leaving imprints of something heavenly
    randomize
    old things coming to loose leafs written down then rolled up as scrolls
    naturalize
    totem polls of life with all the faces i have seen and un seen
    popularize
    something i have trouble with as i nudge my conscious and ask a question


    -what is it all asking one?
    well see i am me but can it be
    if i am reincarnated will i be you he a whales or mastodon?
    where is space laid on
    -a mattress of mapless hapless out along times atlas
    well who can i groove with
    the giant galactuis with out touching the end of real?
    -use your mouth to seal the craft that you may sail on and get in as soon as the never has left your possible jive
    damn
    who how when where
    they hell am I?
    burning like old things ive done brought up in conversation
    no more walking around in circles
    because ive had to many squares emerge in the future to come
    solom things ponder on rings that Saturn sings
    And Pluto watches
    Along as i sing a song of reprogramming all teh days that have been long and iffffffffffffffff bubble
    i hit form the bong with the members of eternity
    processignslowly as nebula gases rising to the occasion
    and moving to create new space which i must explore
    -now you may see a leopard in the sea or a monkey on the moon but never a I in homie don’t play that costume!
    i see so turn the light off in my room and begin the count down
    1
    2
    3
    zzzzzzzzzzzzz
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  2. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    just talking to my self in my almost sleep state
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  3. Lyme

    Lyme Guest

    speechless.. overally feeling mostly the todem poleness
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  4. unspoken1

    unspoken1 Revolutionary Wordsmen

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    this was a very good piece...i was feeling it
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  5. vinous

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    really liked the way this flowed, even if at times i couldnt make out wat the significance was, it jst sounded cool.........=)
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  6. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    This was some creative shit man...i like the way you formatted it. Keep it up

    one luv
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  7. iconoclast

    iconoclast Guest

    lovely, i was just saying that i think you are great.
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  8. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    i thank all of you for the reply
    basically i talk to my self
    i guess i was kinda trying to make it colliqual
    to the viewers of the site
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  9. varentao

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    Heh. Liked how you didn't let any conventional poetic form dictate what you were doing. It was an artistic master stroke in it's own right.

    As it bought forward the kind of dis-order and 'anarchy' (well kidn of) of it all to the fore...made it real apparent.

    Nothing else to say, except like a lot, very very nice...

    ...resp...
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  10. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    nice stuff. glad i caught this piece! loved the vibe i got from reading this. a piece that goes to show that poets can ponder anything at all. :)
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  11. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    her you go here you go and here some for you too
    thanks
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  12. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    ^^I said i wanted SUGAR FREE, JACKASS!!

    i.e. no problem...sorry, i'm going through a Russian-American phase..
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  13. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    i wasnt passing out candy
    they were posion apples
    "oh shit he's dead"
    its all good stop watching old james bond movies and sound of music documentations and youll be all good
    ha
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  14. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    Yeah, i know. Sugar free apples. You know how much natural 'fruit sugar' apples have. Too sweet for me, and me teeth...

    *smiles*

    i wonder what made them all black...might be all the pollution in the air. Or the powdery gum gaurd i was wearing. Oh yes, he did say something about poison...gah! I'll stick with me oil drinking theory...






    Once again, nice piece e's...
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  15. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    yo i thought this stuff was lonnnggggg gone hahaha i saw a link for "rapmusic.com" hit it up and im suprised i remembered my password!

    this brings back alot of good memories
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  16. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    stop up'in 7 yr old threads
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