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Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by nO gOoD!, May 18, 2011.

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  1. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Sometimes I feel it's hard to live my life to my potential,
    Then again something hits me with a mic and instrumental.
    It might be influential when I type to keep it simple,
    Still I hope you like it, all my might is with this pencil.
    Sometimes I think I could've had my Mellon in a noose,
    But then I changed my path, instead I'm tellin you the truth.
    I switched to yellin in a booth, to develop it as proof,
    And manufacture something that I'm selling to the youth.
    It's almost like I was feeling kinda stuck in a trap,
    I had enough of my life. And said fuck it with rap.
    But here I am once again, touching some of the facts,
    That keep me motivated, when I'm busy bustin the tracks.
    I'm living a dream, so use your mind and you can flaunt this,
    Anything can happen if you try you can accomplish
    Goals and aspirations, if your slow and have the patience,
    it'll show in half your statements, If you fold from accusations..


    It's so hard.
    test
  2. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    good shit right here son...
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  3. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    no good, what up? haha. Good shit as normal. Flow is dope. Content's sick. Pretty much what I expect when you post somethin up. Not much else to say, definitely liked it. Keep shit up as always. 1
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  4. Edicius

    Edicius Escrituras presionadas

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    i like this, short but powerful - cool ''inner'' rhyme sheme & vocabs on top..

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  5. Arsenic P

    Arsenic P A.K.A. PROPOSITION P

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    good wordplay but i seen alot of ur work so its average for you nigga.
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  6. BeEgEe

    BeEgEe El Warm Shot

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    inspirational
    im writing now
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  7. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    You're true to your name..."no good".
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  8. Blitz_krieg

    Blitz_krieg SAY WHA.........

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    good stuff...
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  9. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Agh GL? wassup dude
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  10. bombtharhymes

    bombtharhymes New Member

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    very well written...simple and basic but real
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  11. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    the message is over done, and now a cliché in the hip hop industry. The delivery was average.

    This is an OK piece. Nothing complex, flow was basic and the meter was all over the place.

    Not trying to discourage you NO GOOD but I remain a honest friend.
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  12. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Thanks dude. Thus an older piece I threw up for fun ;)
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