NO GRAPHIC FEBRUARY TEXT TOURNAMENT RD 1: Criteria vs Tbone

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  1. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    THE NO GRAPHIC FEBUARY TOURNAMENT!!!!!!



    The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.

    Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.

    All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. If a line limit is not agreed on by both battlers, the second battler to post must match the # of lines posted by the first battler. You can post less but never more.

    You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.

    No, biting, recycling, or feed. Being gay will result in a DQ, so some of you have no chance at all.
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  2. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    I oppress to cease harm drop'n lyrical bombs
    u a joke like lines thats flip, that get stretched on
    couldn't bench my bars, leaving you weak & scar
    sorry you've been straggled along, to be plastered tar
    u don't want war, how ya beef is wit sexuality & morality
    reality ya fraudulent foundation slip society, but not this causality
    ya do it wit a sign like dickryders in need, I do this wit ease and speed its viscosity
    should take the last line of the rule quota literally, seriously
    you'll bite concepts rehearsing setups, to restraint having to feed
    I'm potent just look how my dopeness got u
    hate me but I stand by my culture, you somebody nobody check'n to see
    unless ya Jin or taking orders, fitting to serve Chinese
    that isn't ya ethnic? than I strip ya achievements like ya Vietnamese
    Ya coming up short, like asian knees to bars on pogo sticks
    you flow straight, but show more moods than a wooding pool stick
    don't take it as a compliment, cause we all know criteria bitch
    go head pull the race card...WHEN
    you the only oreo in the tourney, that can't speak the english alphabet
    i'm what I spit for real, you just a sucker wit a image kick'n gimmicks
    better peep my sig, before you step foot on the line of scrimmage
    i've been in the GRB and lost, only fact there the kid didn't kill me
    u been at this for years, try'n get a rep think'n ya typing off a hot beat

    play ya position shorty
    before shyt get cross making more of a mess than chop sticks
    i'm in it to win it to prearranging the script
    how ya old timers took enough spins on it
    to the point that ya finger tip and needle joined
    so shout to those who really flexed a joint above it
    ur just a 3rd class wit a net pass, who try'n make noise
    if it wasn't for the big names you've battled, ya name wouldn't be forge
    its gone be obvious ya ran for the title
    but couldn't run to get a jump
    like all ya failure attempts being a championship idol
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  3. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    in, just seen this...wtf @ 30 lines in the first, and why is everybody i'm battling lately been dropping so early.


    LOL.
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  4. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    posting, just wrote to match.
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  5. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    At first your 30 line verse screamed ridiculous..
    but its so watered down,
    fuck a T-bone, he came across more the liquid protein equivalent.
    I'ma win this shit., voters know me with the tightest flow,
    ur fake.. modelling yourself to a different story... like Tyra's show.
    T reminds me of a typical textcee that i'd clown in debuts,
    Cuz bone's just a carbon copy of Fracture, without the breakthrough.
    Were you mad with the placement?.. bitch, ur lackin in cadence
    Silent titled this: criteria to bone, cuz we know this battle is rapeage.
    Plus, I heard dudes are bangin ya whore more then average,
    .. ur girl had so many seeds in her
    Men open up her vag with a bit torrent tracker.
    I'd kidnap this dude. tied down with snakes in a rabid feud.
    Leave u in a pitt so deep, Ben Roethlisberger wouldnt pass to you
    A bitch in textin', one punch leaves you with split perception
    I'll clock you in the head, then time the rate of spins per second.
    His verses are held with mixed receptions.. he'll bitch the facts
    T's so far removed from reality. Morpheus's pill couldn't get him back
    & dude it's often seen that your style is too awkward geek
    I'll twist your spine so fast discs'll start flying & inspire pics in UFOlogy.
    I've clowned ur type before.. props u get are rare in rappin'
    me beating u is so old hat- your hailing a return of 30's era fashion.
    This is like school sports, its over dick. this mad gays retiring
    RM WOULD have a bone to pick, cept' they want u out the game entirely.
    Besides. He loves nuts on his chin, a fact that I had to utter
    So we should call him t-bag, since we seen t-bone was lackin structure
    Your garbage. Ya styles ass, and u came with the wackest diss
    so after that setup, I have nothing else to state that's more accurate
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  6. Tristan.

    Tristan. took your girl.

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    tbone
    lacked in structure, flow, and concepts were just too jumbled. it was hard to quote anything.


    criteria
    verse was ok, you had some lines that stood out. it was enough to take the battle.

    vote-criteria
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  7. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    No hate....


    But as you can see i got a space, because i started on a new verse...


    So you just reading it wrong...
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  8. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    tbone not sure how long you been battling for but i notice you been on rm since 2000. maybe you just havent battled in a while or something. but your verse just wasnt popping here man. you didnt really word ya punches hard or come too witty at all. seemed like you keyed that verse in less than a minute. no hate. keep at it and elevate homie. criteria was in a different league here. he had the better lines, creativity, wit, was more polished ect..

    vote - Criteria
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  9. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    V/Cri

    He was just on a different playing field.

    His flow sometimes was weird, but then again so was Tbones lol.

    T, you had some concepts but you didn't word them properly, and that was your biggest problem i think.
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  10. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    Criteria wins.
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