NO GRAPHIC FEBRUARY TEXT TOURNAMENT RD 1: Burd. vs David Lama

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  1. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    THE NO GRAPHIC FEBUARY TOURNAMENT!!!!!!



    The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.

    Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.

    All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. If a line limit is not agreed on by both battlers, the second battler to post must match the # of lines posted by the first battler. You can post less but never more.

    You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.

    No, biting, recycling, or feed. Being gay will result in a DQ, so some of you have no chance at all.
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  2. Burd.

    Burd. #1

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    16-20. holla.
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  3. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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  4. Burd.

    Burd. #1

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    man wtf. i already have line for YOU. i haven't got time to be writing for other opponents.
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  5. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    ok then. i'll key 10 for you later today
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  6. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    burd? haaaaaaaaaaa

    watch how ya rep is lessened when ur wrecked in seconds
    cuz when it comes to u or i.. all the votes’ll give u a spelling lesson
    now keep ^that in mind. since it alone just beat ya kid
    so what if I didn’t show for EYEZ last week?…THIS week I did
    4-0 in the RBL? u should have the game shocked
    but who couldn’t beat coil grimly, Xquisite and grey fox?
    fact is ur surely lame with wordplay that’s poorly laid
    1 punch from me’ll leave u more fucked up than the tourneys name
    & ur crews fulla lames. i’ll grab the chance to speak this
    cuz no one cares if u BDC.. we all just Marvel at ya weak shit
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  7. Burd.

    Burd. #1

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    omg i literally am going out & wont be back till tomoro. have no time.

    but still..

    wow @ ur wording, grammar, wit.. my thoughts could sell.
    cuz if u ever a great speller. it's roleplayin w. all those orcs n' elves.
    w/ zero effort, i'd murder u so ur dead dipshit.
    ur style is such a drag. it's on the corner rockin' a wig & some red lipstick.
    kid w/ one punch you'll prolly land in the dirt.
    hit u so hard your inner child will cause a fuckin amber alert.
    stick to admin'n dead sites, ur critique style is fake & dumb
    lama got a heart of stone that'll get excalibur'd when i take the plunge
    get clever w/ ur execution.. punches like urs never scare
    u got THAT statement style.. that snitches are usin everywhere.

    holla
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  8. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    Lama, I liked your U-I line (although I used one last week and got bashed on for it) but it was coo, and your closer was nice...but other than that, it was pretty simple. Burd, you're verse was pretty consistent...there wasnt a bar that I didnt like...the excalibur one was my favorite....so I give it to burd for having more creative punches and consistentcy

    vote = Burd
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  9. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    for the record. i only threw a verse up quick cause burd said he already had lines for me when i said i wasnt gonna show due to me losing my connection. if i knew he was just gonna recycle his whole verse i wouldnt had bothered showing or i myself would had recycled but i noticed it was against the rules so i didnt. dont mean to be a bitch but him saying he had lines for me when he obviously didnt would make him one too in my book.
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  10. Tristan.

    Tristan. took your girl.

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    execution was eh sometimes, but you had some nice lines. i could tell you probably didn't really try though.

    amber alert was lotb, concepts, creativity and execution was a little bit better than lama's. you also had better attempts and better non-quotables.

    vote-burd
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  11. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    lama - not your best week, for sure. Didn't really have any standout lines. Lines 3-6 were the best, but they were only okay. Marvel line wasn't executed very well.

    burd - Opener was cool. Drag line was alright. Closer was okay. Didn't like the rest. However, it was a strong enough display to get the win over an opponent that wasn't up to par.

    v- burd.
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  12. Eko Ren

    Eko Ren New Member

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    This is incredible. I can't believe what I'm seeing.

    I haven't voted at all... can I vote? Well, whatever, I'm voting.

    Let me break it down:

    watch how ya rep is lessened when ur wrecked in seconds
    cuz when it comes to u or i.. all the votes’ll give u a spelling lesson


    This flowed well, and it was clever. Over a beat, that'd sound dope.

    now keep ^that in mind. since it alone just beat ya kid
    so what if I didn’t show for EYEZ last week?…THIS week I did
    4-0 in the RBL? u should have the game shocked
    but who couldn’t beat coil grimly, Xquisite and grey fox?


    This is a fucking TKO. A nice little personal that colors cat bitchmade.

    fact is ur surely lame with wordplay that’s poorly laid
    1 punch from me’ll leave u more fucked up than the tourneys name
    & ur crews fulla lames. i’ll grab the chance to speak this
    cuz no one cares if u BDC.. we all just Marvel at ya weak shit


    This, I thought was pretty clever too. Mind you, this is all within the scope of this battle here.

    This was all vs.

    wow @ ur wording, grammar, wit.. my thoughts could sell.
    cuz if u ever a great speller. it's roleplayin w. all those orcs n' elves.


    This is the worst bar I've ever seen or heard in my entire life.

    w/ zero effort, i'd murder u so ur dead dipshit.
    ur style is such a drag. it's on the corner rockin' a wig & some red lipstick.


    "I'd murder you so you're dead, dipshit." Wait, wait, and that's immediately followed with this big long ridiculous sentence about how his style is a "drag". With a reference to a cross-dressing prostitute. "A wig and some red lipstick." Did you people really read this verse?

    kid w/ one punch you'll prolly land in the dirt.
    hit u so hard your inner child will cause a fuckin amber alert.


    You'll probably land int he dirt. And your inner child will get lost in Walgreens.

    stick to admin'n dead sites, ur critique style is fake & dumb
    lama got a heart of stone that'll get excalibur'd when i take the plunge


    You like this because it has some weird European-conjunctioned Excalibur reference despite the fact that it ends with "take the plunge"?! And what the fuck does being a website administrator or critiquing have to do with rapping, this battle, or anything?!

    get clever w/ ur execution.. punches like urs never scare
    u got THAT statement style.. that snitches are usin everywhere.


    Snitches. Honestly. Snitching on what?

    Dude, that verse was complete CRAP. What the fuck are you people talking about, "execution, bla bla"?! Execution of what?! This isn't verbal! They aren't executing anything! If you're talking about flow, you're lying..

    VOTE: DAVID LAMA
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  13. Arduous1

    Arduous1 Alias truth speaker. FYL!

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    what an obvious alias piece of shit vote that was...[sick]...niggas scared to lose is whats hot now?...no wonder text died...
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  14. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    lmao if you are insinuating that thats me. but since its obvious that you are burd.. with just 3 posts. im'a go ahead and vent too. only under my name unlike you.

    i keyed a verse.

    not only did this guy recycle which is against the rules but he recycled lines that were played before he ever even first used them lol.. grantid my verse is blaaa but his isnt only bla and recycled its played

    just an example of what im talking about.

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    how many times has inner child been flipped?? a million times? and it still gets props? lol. heres one of the many times

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    all im saying is lol. if flipping played shit in battles is what wins then i dont wanna win.

    thats my 2 cents. so no Arduous1 (aka burd.?) niggas aint scared to lose. especially when thats what wins.
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  15. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    After review. The ruling on the field has been overturned. The player was found to have recycled lines.

    DQ to Burd. Lama's Lesbians will not be charged a timeout.
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