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Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by mr.redeyez, Apr 13, 2012.

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  1. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    Fear is not an option bro
    that's why,i murder every obstacle
    life or death? Ur choice it is optional
    i'm already dead so dien isn't possible
    up strap,then fire at cha' follicle's
    don't tell me,what is and isn't logical
    cuz' i don't like he say she say
    they take word's,-n- spin it like a dj
    i know ya say,redeyez verse is so cliche
    well vice versa,
    my bark might be loud,but my bite alot worsa
    i practice what a preach,first verse without cursin'
    gotta passion for tha reef,i get twisted like cursive
    every word a keyword,,,so i ain't gotta reword
    cuz i mean ev'ry word.
    test
  2. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    You are absolutely terrible.
    test
  3. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA GymArt

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    Leaves room for improvement, I get the message you were going for between the lines, but something about it, is making the verses look hella confusing.

    Props for not cursing, though.
    test
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