Nice Jerk(TAB) & Verbhertz --- "Mind Right" --- Drop links and panties.

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  1. VerbHertz

    VerbHertz Lexicon

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    yeah, and he's better than me. that fucking hurts. a dude that doens't exist is better than me.

    anyone got a noose?
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  2. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    1st off verbz thx 4 feed homie now 2 song... 1st kat flow fast nice like it delivery there as well hoook nice beat chypher type shits nice 2nd kat verbz merkd quality a lil low not bad tho flow solid delivery there topic nice feelin this shit ima peep more stay up
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  3. Higher Rhymes

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    Beat is madd trippy.. verry west coast bouncy type.. very cool

    1st - Nice Jerk - flow is very west coast, nicely put together.. flow is solid, voice is robotic sometimes.. but fits the beat well for somereason quality good, your delivery is also polished

    Hook - Nice Jerk- DOPEEE dont even nkow what you're syaing but it's madd illy hahaha damn it's cool

    2nd - Verbhertz - flow is nice, but punches in a few times.. offbeat like once at that "pick up your skirt" line.. uhh pretty quick flow, nice delivery also, cool voice fits beat well, quality not as good but still okay

    all in all 8/10 good track gentlemen
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  4. Eluzion

    Eluzion Invasion Productions

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    Listening...

    I'm loving that beat first off..

    Nice Jerk - Your flow is nice on this, but it seems like it could've been put together alittle better production wise, but overall it was straight.

    Hook - The hook could be put together alittle better as well, it's hard to understand at times, but pretty catchy.

    Verbhertz - Your flow starts off nice on this, but once again it could be put together better production wise, but once again it came good.

    Overall I mean it was a good track, but I'd spend a little more time mixing it down..stay up.
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  5. psomonkey

    psomonkey Sin Ontology

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    beats nice dogg fasho feelin it

    tab-flows real good....but ya presence is real weak dogg...delivery is decent...lyrics are decent....overall verse is decent

    hooks pretty cool

    verbhertz- presence is weak too dogg....flows good....deliverys good....lyrics are cool....just need better presence

    overall this tracks aiight

    peep mines too

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=978715
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  6. The Rippa

    The Rippa RIP is the name!!!!!!!!!!

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    Liked the beat as soon as it dropped...the flow on the first verse is tight man. I was feeling that cat there a lil more than the second person. I like the hook you spit to this. Keep bangin. pretty good track

    hit me >> http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979629

    then check U READY
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  7. TAB

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    thanks fam links returned
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  8. DjayCasper

    DjayCasper Eh Fuck It.

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    beats coooooooo..

    to me sound a lil monotone i need more expression on ur vocals
    i need to hear you feelin what u sayin

    jump out at me


    its almost computerized the way you flow it
    the flow is on but jus aint no feelin

    2nd dudes a lil beeeettter
    he switches his flow for a lil bit, good but then he goes back to the old one

    switch up the flow more ill be feelin this shit
    like the hook though


    keep it up
    maybe its jus not my style
    keep doin music you like.
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  9. VerbHertz

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    thanks cas...

    im drunk, hi
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  10. matchbox

    matchbox New Member

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    returning peepage...

    nice beat...1st cat,dope flow,reminds me of the old outkast atliens shit but it seemed a bit monotone though shoulda fucked with his flow a bit more...hook is ehh,its aight...2nd cat,flow is kool,mumbled here and there but i think its the mixing,like some adlibs was off a lil...but overall this was kool,its on some other shit,but i like it..wish it coulda been longer though
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  11. VerbHertz

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  12. M.Maestro

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    diggin the beat.. got the ol school hiphop drum swing

    first cat - flow is smooth, even when u rush teh words. emotion needs a bit of work.
    lyrics are good

    hook - hook is cool, shouldve sang it more


    second cat should work on polishin the flow, .. hard for me to keep up wit the lyrics cuz the flow is choppy


    overall, the hook shouldve been sung with more emotion and hjarmony, that wouldve brought the hook out more.
    first cat should work on the emotion, and the second cat flow

    other than that, good track

    keep elevatin;

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979616
    Peep and hoffa
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  13. VerbHertz

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    no sleep 'til brooklyn
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  14. TAB

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  15. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    beat is sick...

    tab-flow is nice..damn...hahah...style is crazy

    verb-came good...flow was solid..lyrics was on point....hot verse

    both yall came good yo...like match box said...tab was kinda monotoned but it aint bother me none...he still recked it....

    overall this was a good joint....keep it up...props`1

    return the feed if ya can...
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=979823
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  16. TAB

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    thanks homie

    upping one last time
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  17. Soulanova

    Soulanova Soul Lo

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    beat is fuckin nice...shit i wanna get on this track man haha,y'all gon do a remix? soulanova@gmail.com holla at that

    aight to get to the feedback- Beat is ill as fuck. Period. First cat, verse is nice. voice is rapped nice as well, especially with the double vocals and all. the hook like cat said before ain't really singing but it's chill. second cats flow is a lil off, hard to make out some shit or pay attention a lil for that matter.

    overall i give the trak a 7/10. quality was chill. flow could be a lil polished on second cats verse. other than that y'all did ya thing. thanks for the feed on my shit too. 1
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  18. TAB

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    thanks mwaz to all ya'll...no taye diggs
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  19. CRAM

    CRAM a.k.a. Ellis Nova

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    really feelin this beat...1st verse is nice, u comin with that "Rosa Parks" flow on this...woooooooooo....hook was cool, did the trick for this track, 2nd verse, likin this, u guys soundin good together, but damn @ this beat, im lovin it!! woooooo, stay up guys!
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