*New!* What I Really Need (Drop Links)

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  1. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Well Basically I Recorded This Last Night...But I Found It Was Way Too Short...Like 2 Minutes And A Half...So I Added An Intro and Outro By Dane Cook. Real Funny Shit. So Check It Out...I Tried Fixing My Emotion From All The Feedback From The Other Track I Posted A Few Days Ago. So Here's The Finished Product...Check It Out. It's The Track On The Top With That Cute Chick On The Display Pic.

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=226092

    Leave Links And I'll Return The Favor Promptly.

    Thanks Folks!
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  2. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    I love Dane Cook.. dat guy is hilarious...., This beat is ILL.. I like this beat ...., I have heard this beat be4.. it is dope... , The concept of this track is kinda simple but you put it together coo, nice ish here yo. flow is on point, I think your delivery could be polished up a lil more, and quality and mixiong could be alot better. not feeling the chorus... funny lil track.. keep elevating yo

    peep my newest track plz

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=923584
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  3. DjayCasper

    DjayCasper Eh Fuck It.

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    definitly on point.
    you sound polished...
    jack off to a personality haha...
    humorous
    flow is nice delivery is too.....

    this shit is jokes im likin it

    it aint rap it aint rock.. hm

    nice track

    keep it up. better than i expected
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=923646
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  4. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    Yeah Well There's Nothing Much I Can Do For The Quality...I'm Using A Computer Mic And Cool Edit Pro...The Basic Shit. So That's The Best I Could Do.

    But Thanks For The Feed...I've Been Trying To Fix My Delivery But I Just Can't...I Feel Like I'm Forcing Myself To Rap In A Certain Way...I Just Gotta Get Use To It But Imma Keep On Trying. Thanks For The Advice Man. Uppin.
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  5. FinesseNYC

    FinesseNYC FinessetheGreat

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    Lenny Blaze New Member

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  7. Diztinkt

    Diztinkt New Member

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    Flow Was On Point, Simple And A Little Choppy At Points. Lyrics Is Ok, As Far As a Diss This Was Pretty Funny LoL, The Dawson's Creek Thing Was Funny Cuz That Show Is Straight Up Homo. I Dont Give A Fuck About Quality Cuz Not Everyone Is Lucky Enough To Be Able To Go In The Studio Which Is Somethin Most Of These Fucks On RM Don't Understand. We All Started Somewhere, Some Of Us Are Just Fortunate Enough To Have The Money For, Or Be Involved With A Record Label That Owns A Studio. Decent Joint Overall. Keep Writing

    ~1~
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  8. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    ^ LoL You Heard The Wrong Song Homie...
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  9. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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  10. Charlie_Br0wn

    Charlie_Br0wn (Creative Alias Here)

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    When I Say "BUMP"...Yall Give Me Feedback...

    ...BUMP!...

    ...???
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  11. MisterE

    MisterE Look @ His Face Now!

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    yo yo whuddup did someone say bump?





    ahaha Dane Cook is sickmatic....nice lil intro




    lyrics are dope, deliverys nice......lol dry an juiceless, feindin for cock......stealin my boxers......so many cherrys



    nice catchy lil hook.......sounds like you could use a lil more oomph, pizzaz, emotion......but you represented on this tho......shit was nice all around, nice outro ahahaaha he recycled that shit shit for the VMA's




    hit a cracker back




    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12588920#post12588920
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  12. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    flow is tight

    delivery could use some elevation sounds like u aint putting that much emotion in... having trouble getting to grips with your accent but thats ok

    lyrically this was good.... really foul shit "girls stealing my boxers only to sniff em" rofl

    yeah this was hilarious... cherries line was dope

    so yeah track was pretty good but room for improvement

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=924637 please
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