New Verse up...Leav ya links..i'll hit back a.s.a.p

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  1. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    i did a collab wit a dude from school... i finished early and he hasnt finished his verse yet so i just recorded mine,mixed it alil and uploaded it till he finish his..

    n e way...workin on flow n all that so lemme know what you think...

    track is here http://www.soundclick.com/ceson


    LEAVE YA LINKS...i hit back a.s.a.p
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  2. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    uppin..leave ya links
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  3. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    daaaaaaaaaamn
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  4. LiLKapone

    LiLKapone New Member

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    my browser cant find ur page dawg :-/
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  5. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    the link works fine...
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  6. pressence

    pressence Active Member

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    beats sick what beat is it...... lyrics aint bad delivery and flow are kinda weird... work on that alittle bit switch it up ull be cool
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  7. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    diff steez for diff folks.... uppin for feed
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  8. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn...again
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  9. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    uppin for feed 1 more time...leave ya links
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  10. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    returning the favour

    you got a cool voice....i figure u started out kinda recently...you'll learn how to use your voice better as you keep spittin....once you fully polish it you'll sound ill

    your flow was on point for the most part...this was pretty nice...i didn't really like the beat...you'd probably sound better over a different type of beat

    but this was str8....flow was cool...lyrics were str8...

    full version would've been nice
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  11. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    thankz for the feed
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  12. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    uppin for feeeeeeeeeed and linxxxxxxx
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  13. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    hot daaaamn..lol
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  14. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Interesting voice man, sounds real grimey but chill at the same time, real different. Haven't heard anything like that before.

    "go ahead and talk, I'll pull out cardboard" <GANGSTAAAA AS HELLLLL
    my favorite line ever LOL damn you

    beat is madd funky, heard it somewhere before

    flow is trippy and delivery is on point man, ridin the beat pretty well if I do say so myself...

    overall nice stuff, good drop take it easy and thanks for the feed.
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  15. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    thx yo....
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  16. returning the feed...

    aiight props on the beat maker...aiight first thing I notice is the way you ride a beat could be improved you dig? delivery and voice is cool but flow and beat riding could really step up in my opinion um production could also stand some improvement... aside from that nice track content could come up to...
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  17. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    sup ceson, thx 4 the feed now 2 ur song... beat nice flow is standin out real nice hook on point as well love the delivery and also i agree with higher got that agressive voice thats real grimey maybe thats what stand out not much 2 crituque nice drop and keep em comin fam 1
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    Lenny Blaze New Member

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  19. Blak

    Blak Producer Of the Year

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    I like your delivery this is really different I can not say many sound like you... I think for now on you should have a finished product before you post it to the net.... Just so you can have a dope song... Good work man the beat is nice too... But lyrically is what you want more than the beat...

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  20. SpoonFull

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    Flow is alright, kinda basic. Delivery is different. Lyrics are your strong point. You stay on beat for sure. Quality is lacking some.

    This was cool man. NOt a whole lot that stood out but it was a nice listen. I'd work on polishing the delivery and switching the flow around some. Keep at it bro

    best

    -spooner
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