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  1. Minnesota Snipe

    Minnesota Snipe New Member

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    kool lyrical stuff, keep up the good work, TWIN CITIES ON THE MAP
    test
  2. B!tchPlease

    B!tchPlease New Member

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    what dinero sample is that?......kindah short, before i could really absorb your personality it was over....get comfortable with it homie....keep it coming


    holla at me
    test
  3. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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    word up thanks for peeping that freestyle son.. umm let me peep this..

    i like this beat its very nice... i like ya flow and ya delivery on this as well.. its very nice...
    your rhyming is nice.. u got a nice presence as well... some lines was really nice in here..... good work man keep it up this complex... peace...
    test
  4. l_dopa

    l_dopa New Member

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    It's a pretty straight little drop. I think you need to work on your mic presence though. Keep it up
    test
  5. Erattic

    Erattic New Member

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    pretty straight drop... beat is dope... wut kinda ascent is that? sounds weird... prolly ur only bigest downfall. flow is on point... lyrics are on point... caught one or 2 corny punches but overall they were nice..

    keep dropen

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  6. eNfO

    eNfO YEEEAH BABY

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    Ok the first thing I notice when you come in is that accent. Sounds kinda weird. Im not really feeling the beat and your voice doesnt really fit this. Flow is on point, nothing off at all, you should just work on adjusting to the beat. Also, this is way too short, I woulda wrote a few more bars and maybe a hook. You got the flow down pact though, just get more comfortable rapping overall.


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  7. P L A C E R

    P L A C E R Registered Po Pimp

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    quality is alright. sounds pretty clear,but flow-wise your delivery did have an accent to it. some of the words were forcing the accent out aswell. vocals were a tad loud too. you rode the beat pretty good,lyrics was good,rhyme scheme was straight too. keep it up playa
    test
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