*NEW TRACK* Higher Rhymes - Stay (feed will be returned promptly as always)

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  1. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Hey everybody, I haven't really had time to be recording or doing my music thing lately as my work/school schedule does not allow. But I have MANY updates comming for you guys soon hopefully, I've been writing a lot of music as of late.

    Any way this is my brand new track called "Stay"
    Story: basically a lyrical apology to someone very special to me.. long story short I messed up and hopefully this keeps things together.

    Feed will be returned promptly as always ladies and gents.

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    lyrics:
    [Verse 1]:
    honestly, i don't know where to start
    but i, had the spark, and i ruined it--gone/
    'cause im silent when it's hard, why didnt I talk?
    got up, strolled away and made the sadness prolonged/
    bizarre, i sound pathetic, i was really headstrong
    thought i made the right decision, but it wasn't too smart/
    sixth sense is unhappiness, something is wrong
    and im new behind the wheel, moved slow from the start/
    its hard, my head's up and i'm carrying on
    like the luggage, but it wasnt, still not movin too far/
    december first, now im lost, knew i didnt belong
    and your place in my soul was replaced by a scar/
    'cause you're not there to fill it, now its empty and dark
    and you think i dont see you, but im watchim the stars/
    get it? there's a void and it's where you belong
    under my arm, i'm with you 'cause i fall when you fall/

    2x[hook]:
    stay, please promise rainy days and grey (could you stay with me?)
    skys, will turn to sunshine and a happy face (sunshine's all I need)
    and i've, made mistakes, that i wish i could take (I'm sorry)
    back, and so i pray and i..just pray..and i

    [Verse 2]:
    fallin apart, it's all just becomming a loss
    personally took the fall, now my name is at fault/
    i'm missin' you, and regretin' every day we apart
    apologize a thousand times, and its stright from the heart/
    take a walk, memories just enclosin' my thoughts
    retention block, and im scared 'cause the day you depart/
    i'll never see you again, so i'm tieing loose ends
    i'm never too far, i love you, I don't want us to end/
    there was never better days than the days that we spent
    together--and now the weather picks me up in the wind/
    im selfish, and i know, that i kept you for all
    the wrong reasons, now i'm bleedin sayin never again/
    will i hurt you, lungs purple, cuz i can't breath in
    and my eyes turnin watery i wont pretend/
    you got to me, didnt bother with my last defense
    alone, but wishes wont fix relationships/ im sorry

    2x[hook]:
    stay, please promise rainy days and grey (could you stay with me?)
    skys, will turn to sunshine and a happy face (sunshine's all I need)
    and i've, made mistakes, that i wish i could take (I'm sorry)
    back, and so i pray and i..just pray..and i


    Higher Rhymes - Stay
    lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3924969&q=lo
    hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3924969&q=hi

    perpetual productions on the beat..

    Holla
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  2. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    ZzzZzZzzz...
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  3. Jig Saw

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    this was a nice joint, b. I liked the vibe a lot- the content went perfect with the beat. The only criticism i would have (which is real minute) would just be to pan the overdubbed bits of the chorus left or right. Like, "(could you stay with me?)/(sunshine's all I need)" etc- have those on the left or right cuz otherwise they dont get heard as well.

    Keep doing ya thing. PEACE!
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  4. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Thanks a lot G-Smooth, really appreciate it! haha yea I was going to pan them out but I just decided not to for some reason, anyway thanks for enjoying my track

    keep the feed comming!
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  5. Slums

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    begiining is dope


    i like this beat..and shit..this is dope.. as fuck..
    flow is sick, quality is cool..HOLLA AT ME we boutta polly something..
    trhis shit is hard, son im twisted as fuck right now..but this shit HARD az Fuck, and shit..holla

    AIM-SLumsGFX
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  6. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Thanks a lot for the feed Slums, really appreciate it. I'll most def hit you up about a collab or something.

    Keep the feed comming.
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  7. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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    listening...intro is cool... beats raw qualitys dope... flowin just raw on that real tip... feelin your emotion in this man. yea man i like the lyrics in this... this chorus is dope to... damn son this shit is raw... definately the best shit ive heard from you. this is a must download killin shit homie...

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=982727
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  8. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Thanks for the love Under, you know I'll hit you back most deffff homie


    keep the playsss upp!
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  9. Raw_Blow

    Raw_Blow Addiction in the Flesh

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    returns feed

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    crazy intro, liking how that shit kicks in, mad dope beat mang, u kick in, levels are perfect fo real, u flowin' over this shit nicely dawgy, delivery's slick, as well as presense, but that's expected from u homie, lyrical content's following this like ya shadow on a sunny day, real nice hook, put together dope, second verse is slick too, u did the thing on it, held down just as equally as the first, overall this is a really good track homie, u did the thing, stay up, One

    :~!
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  10. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Thanks for the feed doggy!
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  11. BiggK757

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    aint really feelin tha beat...........intro was crazy...........hook is tuff but i think u could space the "stay wit me etc." a lil after ya lines nah mean..........Verses is hot tho.......This is definitely hot tho homie........keep doin u..........return tha favor ..........100
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  12. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    thanks a lot b good looks mayne

    keep that feed commin yall
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    this was real smooth, i like the feeling of this alot. the hook is simple but its effective, i like it that way. the content of this is solid as well. good work right here, i'm feeling it.

    get at me cuzzo http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=984912
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  16. Higher Rhymes

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    thanks for hollerin at me guys!

    keep it up!
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  19. Higher Rhymes

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    Thanks for the feed homie

    hollaaa
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  20. killa_bone

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    Love the intro...Crazy.

    Liking the sound of the beat, a lot...fuck yeah this is nice. Flow's smooth as a waxed vagina. everything on point, this is getting downloaded and put on cd for sure.
    Nothing much to say about it apart from it's real good music man.

    Have you had many people send you their versions of 'Never Know' the open colab tune I think I'm gonna write something for that, i'm loving that tune as well??

    Here's my tune in the meantime: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=984320

    Cheers.
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