New track "Go Ahead Wit It"

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  1. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    AS ALWAYS, DROP LINKS

    Just dropped a new track "Go Ahead Wit It"

    still a rough draft, cuz I'm havin some quality issues....cool edit keeps movin my tracks a split second ahead so some of the addlibs are out of place

    definitely not my usual style, and this is the first track I really rocked where I have to rhyme fast like this....

    hook is a bug question mark for me, so let me know how you feel about it...

    beat by FlipSide Entertainment

    http://www.soundclick.com/envizion
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    peace,
    Envizion
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  2. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    Lyrics:

    HOOK:
    Ya wanna test me,
    go ahead wit it (2x)
    Try to get the best of me,
    go ahead wit it (2x)
    Think ya got the recipe,
    go ahead wit it (2x)
    You ain't got the weaponry,
    so go ahead wit it (2x)

    VERSE 1:
    Prepare for war, as I tear ya off,
    A lil suttin, that makes ya wanna ya heart,
    To En-V, if it's just you and me,
    Goin round fa round, I break it down beautifully,
    For you to see, what I do to beats,
    My skill honestly, is the truth to me,
    And it's nuttin but garbage ya words give birth to,
    Yo whac, and I break ya shit like commercials,
    Envi-Zion, middle name controversial,
    Youre the cat, my flames dispere through,
    Yall talk a lot, but can't walk a step,
    Find ya body, outlined in chalk and left,
    I'm tellin ya now, I'd be hard to press,
    I spit flames, until there's no targets left,
    Ya betta step back, and check En-V,
    Cuz I'm comin of age, like Memphis Bleek.

    HOOK

    VERSE 2:
    Yall owe me about half ya rhymes,
    Half ya style, I take half the time,
    To unleash the flow, and write this shit,
    Than you take to bite two lines of it,
    Ya betta have the time to rewind this shit,
    I'm quick wit it, so by the time ya mind is hit,
    Yall undastand, that my rhyme's legit,
    Then ya realize, just what time it is,
    It's time to rip, tear, and break the mold,
    Storm the gates, take control,
    Rock the beat, wit the right pace of flow,
    Stay on point, and neva break from the whole,
    Construct the rhyme, it's designed in IMAX,
    Surround sound, visuals, build to climax,
    Hit the weights, wit no breaks in between,
    Hidden deep, and interlaced in the green.

    HOOK

    VERSE 3:
    I burst through, set mics ablaze,
    Set the tone, try to find the way,
    To say what I neva had, the time to say,
    Bless the mic, I'm enshrined and praised,
    Check mics, when I come and test the flow,
    Mic check, I'm gunnin 4 best in show,
    [LORD] FINESS[e]in flows, cuz I'm HIP TO THE GAME,
    Wit ACTUAL FACTS, that can flip through the flames,
    And rock steady, while I sit through the pain,
    Kickin it, like I learned ninjitsu a-gain,
    Sit through the game, and watch the win,
    That I draw in, as naturally a oxygen,
    When I breath, I keep on flowin,
    And I keep on flowin, when I bleed,
    The blood, sweat, tears, flows through the lines,
    Like blood in the veins or thoughts through my mind.

    HOOK
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  3. RiggsofHTI

    RiggsofHTI New Member

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    beat was hot..some club type shit..flow was cool alot of energy..lyrics and content were aight..hook was pretty catchy..overall not a bad song..keep up the good wrk

    -Riggs
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  4. WerdHertz

    WerdHertz off my rocker

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    This was alright. Not really my type of music, but I can respect what's done.

    The hook is actually pretty decent. I don't mind it. You could blend the "Go ahead with it" better with the other parts of the hook. Volume, I think, might do it.

    Good work otherwise. Kinda pointless to comment on sound quality since it doesn't have much to do with actual rapping talent.

    A pretty good energetic track. Keep it up.
    test
  5. DJ C-Boss

    DJ C-Boss LEGALIZE POLIGAMY

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    This is alright but lemme give some advice. if you sit when you record dont..stand up, dont rap down into the mic, hang or suspend it face level or a bit higher so it dont sound like your so muffled in spots. you have a lot of potential, keep it up. and if your 'not feeling the beat' but your tryin to expand your style..dont use the beat. you sounded kind of like you werent sure yourself about the song while rappin if that makes sense.

    i aint hatin just tryin to give some feedback.

    stay up

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=959017

    holla back
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  6. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    I appreciate the feedback, but you must think I sound like a newbie....that sittin when you record shit is an elementary lesson....I never sit, it hurts breath control.....I do hold my mic below my face though.....peepin ya link in a min.....
    test
  7. MaseGage

    MaseGage Medicated Productions

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    I'm peeping this because I saw you posted links in like 9 straight topics tryin to get replies...and I feel your pain. haha

    I'm liking this beat. - Intro is hype, love it.

    FLOW IS DOPE. Quality aint that great though, but then again, I'm listenin with headphones, so I can't really give any technical advice on that...
    I like the energy throughout the song, but I don't like the effect you're puttin on your vocals, it seems to distort them in my opinion.
    That hook is nice...on some club shit, done well.

    Good track man, keep it up.
    test
  8. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    ...wonderin what the hell is wrong wit my quality....

    yo, I don't put any effects on my vocals, I put a very slight reverb....and I mean, very slight....only enough to widen the vocals so they're not too thin....

    any idea what it might be? anyone?

    thanks for the feed....politickin can be a muther...

    Envizion
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  9. MaseGage

    MaseGage Medicated Productions

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    Quality is the same thing C-Boss was talkin about - some words are muffled here and there, no real biggy. But yeah, I think I must just be hearin that reverb.

    Don't stress on it too much though man, it still sounds ill.
    test
  10. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    up for the AM
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  11. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    peeped mad shit over the past few days....
    test
  12. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    i like the energy beat sound to techno 4 me tho lol flow nice rhode the beat nice quality could of been a lil betta when the bass kicks in it gets muffled but thats prob the beat ne ways some nice lines that coaught my eye like others said hooks catchy nice overall nice just didnt feel the beat good drop
    test
  13. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    vocals seem kinda low/fuzzy but n e way...
    hook-is coo...
    1st verse-flow is coo ...delivery is nice...lyrics was coo...
    2nd & 3rd-basicly the same as the first

    i mean this was coo yo...u just need a better mic maybe...theres fum fuzzy or w/e in the trak...maybe its ya reverb idk...it was throwin me off tho...besides that it was coo verse wise..u good wit those..flow ect. hook was coo props tho...good drop....`1
    test
  14. SmOOth

    SmOOth New Member

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    i understand why people was questioning the vocal quality but this shit still sound coo to me...



    flow was coo, beat was on some shit not really my style but hot none the less...


    the hook was on some catchy shit also, which is a good thing.....

    keep banging em....one
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  15. Snuggles

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    Quality Is Muffled..You Need To Either Treat Your Room Or Find A Mic That Fits Your Voice Better..

    The Track Though..Flow Is Coo..Lyrics Were Solid..Some Played Lines - Coming Of Age "Memphis Bleek" Ehhh...Emotion Was Purty Good..Matched The Energy Of The Instrumental...Hook Could Be Better..Kinda Repetative..Overall You've Got Some Of The Foundation Laid Down..Just Keep At It Mayne...

    Thanks For Peeping Me
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  16. slumpyjohnson

    slumpyjohnson I.K.E. B!TCH!!!

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    dog dont forget to refresh your effect list in CEP once you install the plug-ins....

    BUMP for ENZ
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  17. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    damn....that's why the shit wasn't working....I was trying to figure out what was going on with it...thought it was separate
    thanks playa
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  18. Urban AKA

    Urban AKA Proper Respect

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    Good looks for leavin feedback on my shit.
    Not really feelin this thought. Not my type of energy. Beat reminds me of some techno mortal kombat shit.. wasn't really diggin that about it. It's coo if you're into that, but it's not my steez. Lyrics wasn't anything special, delivery is what you had goin for you most on this track. Other than that, it was straight.
    test
  19. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    this beat is hot, the hook is alright, i think with some more layers and better quality it could be a lot better, your quality is maddd muffled. 1st verse the flow is on point, really good, but quality isnt really there again

    hook comes back and i sounds better this time actually.. it sounds a lot better when im not reading the lyrics your saying

    again 2nd and 3rd verse have a nice flow n delivery

    are all the hook not the exact same loop?? i just noticed the last one sounds a bit different then the others??

    overall this is nice, just need to get a better mix out of it
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  20. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    thanks man for the feed....some more specific crits on quality always help

    and, no, I didnt use the same loop for the hook.....that last one sounds fucked up cuz cool edit was screwin wit my tracks and puttin a delay on the shit on the playback....thought it was proper before I mixed it down

    Envizion
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