New to this..

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by DLK02, Jun 1, 2003.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. DLK02

    DLK02 Cadillac Pimpin

    Joined:
    Nov 19, 2002
    Messages:
    421
    Somethin i wrote to stay awake in class a while back....


    College bitch
    You sit in my class
    On your ass, that shit's fat
    Makes me want to tap.

    College bitch
    You don't wear makeup
    You wear glasses
    Keep em on when I ejaculate
    On your face.

    College bitch
    I hate you so much.
    You act like I ain't shit
    Like you want to meet up only to work.
    But my dick gets massive every time you're next to me
    I just want to fuck,
    So what you have a boyfriend
    On the other side of the sea
    I know you get horny
    And you need that john blaze bbd.

    College bitch
    I know you can suck
    Don't play dumb
    You little slut.
    If I send you this poem
    Will you misinterpret it?
    Or will you take off your panties
    And let me squirt in it?
    Can I come over to do some 'geometry'?
    And pull your hair when I hit it doggy?
    Fuck a text message bitch
    I want to fuck.

    Don't tease me bitch
    Just cause you're college and all
    Riding your bike
    Going to photography society.
    Bitch you make me sick.
    We don't have to kiss
    You just have to strip.
    No I don't want any more coffee
    Bitch, I'm good.
    What if I unbuckled my pants
    and showed you my wood?
    I've tried controlling this feeling
    But everytime your ass's out
    Plus you've got that look on your face
    Like you're about to pass out.
    Then I picture 7 inches of mine
    Hitting your lungs
    Secreting that mysterious fluid
    That I know that you want.

    College bitch
    I still got your cd.
    I'm waiting for you to come get it.
    test
  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

    Joined:
    May 25, 2003
    Messages:
    869
    I can't really tell you what I think of it, because I found this to be more an open mic then a poem. An open mic, because in poetry, you usually don't talk like this, but what do I know? Anyway, it's an interesting piece, but all in all, I wasn't feeling it. My blessings..
    test
  3. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

    Joined:
    May 19, 2001
    Messages:
    11,131
    ^ i wasnt really feeling it either... i found nothing poetic in this at all... very derogatory... ick.
    test
  4. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2003
    Messages:
    2,740
    wow....sexy....
    degrading...
    real....
    direct....

    i sense you jus holding out on what skills u really got....

    come lay em on tha table for me to look...na mean?

    lol.....

    ~one l ove~
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)