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  1. TWO M.C.S

    TWO M.C.S New Member

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    damn this is an ill beat - first verse is pretty good, thikn a few more adlibs would be nice - but its good right now, doesnt NEED it - hook aint bad - second dude don't sound very polished - came back in to close with a nice third verse

    aside from the other dude, shit was pretty fire - he just gotta tighten his game up a tad - you summed this shit up pretty well in the thread anyway ha

    good stuff

    keep it slappin
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  2. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Thanks a lot for the love yall! keep it commin!

    UPPSS

    peepin ya link as I type
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  3. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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  4. G-n-D

    G-n-D G-n-D

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    beat is nice homie! flow is tight, quality is good, much props. sounds good 2 me
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  5. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Thanks a lot man, keep uppin it!
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  6. Effect.

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    ight then mate rtf,

    beat kicks in real nice feel to it,
    yo first cat, voice is dope, flow is on point
    real nice shit just need to up the delivery abit
    just seems abit low on the vocals, but its a very
    nice verse none the less, hook is coo catchy and
    true to life shit, 2nd verse flow isnt as good,
    lyrics are coo, youre delivery is effected by youre flow
    but you got some good shit man, lil bit of tweeking
    and youll be on form, hooks coo agen, last verse is dope.

    nice song lads.
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  7. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Thanks a lot for the peep brother, keep pumpin my ish and check the page for more song!

    HOLLA

    UPP
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  8. TAB

    TAB Model

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    I didn't like the beat initially, but it grows on you after a short while. First dude reminds me of Gangstarr in terms of voice and enunciation. Flow is smooth and easy to follow. Quality is rich and clean, although the reverb of your room or whatever sounds a tad awkward. Lyrics were solid, but some lines were tentative, meaning you could have worded them better. Only other thing I would suggest is work on your enunciation because some words came out slurred or slightly mumbled. Overall this was a good listen. 1

    Oh yeh, wasn't really feeling the second dude. His flow was almost there, but his voice and delivery was irritating.
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  9. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    returnin feed

    peepin now...beat is hot...

    1st dude-reminds me of this local dude i kno...lol...n e way...dudes on point...i like the flow,delivery is good...lyrics was good yo...on point..i was feelin tha verse
    2nd dude-this dude is coo,flow isnt as smooth as the other dude but good...delivery is coo,voice was coo...this was a coo verse
    3rd verse-same thing as first yo...on point wit it...feelin the lyrics

    hook-is good,deliverd good...nothing bad bout it really...underground typa ish

    i liked this...yall remind me of sum local heads i kno...but yall did ya thing...props,nothing really bad bout this..keep it up
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  10. Higher Rhymes

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    Thanks a lot duke! keep bangin my music yall
    UPS
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  11. Higher Rhymes

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  12. Higher Rhymes

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    Keep viewin! im tryna get to the top of the charts!!
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  13. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    beat smooth like said already ur voice is fuckin made for this beat flow ill breath control is on point as well hook is catchy as well overall shit is nice drop my fav was ur verse tho but other 2 was nice 2 but u merkd the shit
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  14. Fallen

    Fallen www.FallenHipHop.com

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    returnin...

    really likin this beat man... first verse is real nice... lyrics are dope... flow's is def on point... you got a good presence too... chorus is sick... second verse... is nice too... y'all doin it right... final verse doesn't dissapoint.. you guys got this man... I'm feelin ya style alot... good drop man

    PEace
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  15. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    Thanks a lot brothas for the love! keep peepin my music tell ya friends hahaha

    UP THIS
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  16. T.T.P

    T.T.P TurnThePage

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    returning feed...
    beat was super chill and well made
    quality on all vocals was good..
    1st dude,,, voice kinda cool....lyrics is decent....this shit is chill....flow is good
    2ns dude...not feeling the presence as much
    3rd dude....this duke was good....flow smoother, few overdubs kinda off

    overall a good drop keep it up
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  17. Higher Rhymes

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  18. 3rd Inf Soldier

    3rd Inf Soldier Bellwingah, hey! Hey!

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    The Original ~3rd Infintry~ Is back together. Produced Ansane....."Hustle" http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=971493


    WRITING AS I LISTEN

    BEAT IS SOLID, A LIL EMPTY

    1ST VERSE MC HAS NICE VOICE... WRITE A MESSAGE LINE WAS NICE, YOU SOUND LIKE COMMON A LIL... IM ACTUALLY FEELING THIS...

    HOOK: NICE, NEEDS SOME ADLIBS AND I WOULD OF DROPPED THE BEAT ON THE LOOP

    2ND MC.. FLOW ISNT AS PERFECTED AS THE 1ST GUY...PUNCH IN ON THE BREAK WAS OBVIOUS.. USE A ECHO TO BLEND IT MORE

    HOOK I REALLY LIKE... WOULD OF USED A FEW MORE LAYERS MYSELF BUT I LIKES.


    NICE DROP


    The Original ~3rd Infintry~ Is back together. Produced Ansane....."Hustle" http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=971493
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  19. Higher Rhymes

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    Thanks for the feed ^ we go!
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