NEW SONG !! "The Girl No One Wants" (ILL Wayz on the beat) PEEP!!!

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  1. Fernelity

    Fernelity Active Member

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    This tracks awesome, not really your thing.. But nice.. Beats sick.

    Second verse just got over..

    OMG AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    That's too fuckin' good

    Third verse was awesome

    I love this track and how it ended, great sense of humor.. lol

    Good shit dude, awesome
    test
  2. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    thanks for peeping
    test
  3. sean maru

    sean maru New Member

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    I remember you letting me hear this a while back...this is a funny concept and the suprise ending is dope...not something i am going to bump around the clock but this would be a nice filler on a full cd...keep creating.

    sean maru
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  4. doogie howser

    doogie howser does it doogie style

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    nice beat. fut.

    flows pretty good. starts off nicely

    u might wanna put a little more time into your writing
    ie: "and with me, she started to flirt.."
    I think u couldve put more effort into alotta these bars.
    maybe made a more solid point w/ ur time.

    lol. funny shit..
    good story telling.
    nice track, entertaining listen.
    good to see somethin really creative here.

    2 nubs up

    - douglas howsworth, m.dizzle.
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  5. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    thanks fopr peeping the only thing is .. obviously this might be one of the first times you heard me.. and alot of my lyrics are very complex I dumbed this down s everyone could feel it, simple story ish no need to get complex with lines just to get the story across feel me... But yea thanks for peeping
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  6. Arkon

    Arkon ''Ozone check ya PMs''

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    lmao@denku on a chick track


    yeah not one of my fav's from you denk but yeah im felein' flow and lyrics, even when you get into more comon topics you still stay original which is great..beat is ill too

    verse 2>verse 3>verse 1
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  7. Strange1

    Strange1 the northern touch

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    This beat is SICK, not something I expected to hear you over bro.... Voice/Delivery as always is sick and unique... lyrics are dope, very meaningful, until the end lmao, I won't spoil it but thats HILLARIOUS, didn't expect it... flow is your usual good style.... overall this track is pretty tight, just wish it had a chorus, you should add one... if not its still a good track

    get me back at http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921398

    peace

    1ne
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  8. Arkon

    Arkon ''Ozone check ya PMs''

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  9. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    yo this track was nice...

    *downloads*

    i wrote some shit then i forgot to post lol oh well i'll say it again... you've been around for awhile keep ya shit up... this track was nice... ill ways on the beat was a good choice.. imma peep some of your other music. voice flow, story tellin all was good... little if no flaws on this track keep it up man

    drop a reply on my track

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921052
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  10. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    thanks for peeping peeps.. i am hitting up all links tomarrow morning.. when I wake up bess belive it...
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  11. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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  12. Reign

    Reign Let it...

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  13. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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  14. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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  15. I wArFaRe I

    I wArFaRe I Love 2 Hate

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    this shits pretty dope.. nice story track, beats hot too.. diff from what im used to hearing from u.. good shit tho
    test
  16. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    thanks for peeping yo
    test
  17. SpoonFull

    SpoonFull Lovely

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    lol @ the sample. Dope shiiiit. The chipmunk denku is ill. Dope story telling ish. Once again, you're using a softer beat, and it sounds DOPE as shit with your style. This shit is easy to follow too, not scattered at all. Even though I love scattered thought, most people dont. Break is nice, you come right back in nicely. Dope story telling all the way till the next break,....cant wait to see where this is going. lol. oh shit, ur gonna hit it....calling me her king, ROFL. OMFG it's a man. hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaha @ the crying. lmfaoooooooooooo @ shes gotta dick.

    yeah man this was mad entertaining. We've gotta get down on something when i get my shit set up. Should be like a couple days

    hit me back - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=920174

    be safe, spoon
    test
  18. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

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    Yo tai wut up my ³³³³³, this is xxknowledgexgodxx from yahoo, was really hood ³³³³³, this shit sound illy, crazy sonova, this ³³³³³ got issues,, hahaha, i was talking to dice the other day ³³³³³ was like yo where the fucking denku at havent seen you in a min. well i havent been on for a hot min too,

    hit me back nizzle http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12535920#post12535920
    ^^thats some new shit one of my artist recorded at the studio, son, crazy for real,
    test
  19. Betty*Beretta

    Betty*Beretta New Member

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    Listening

    Beat is hot...feeling the sample


    Your style really compliments this beat...your rhyme scheme commands the track...feeling it...concept is real funny..lol..nice shit...flow is nice...content is cool...a lil' simplistic...nothing too hot..but you got ya point across...lol...."what the fuck was that" followed by crying....LOL!!...funniest shit ever. "you look so beautiful"..lol..damn..

    Overall this was a real nice track...real entertaining...good shit

    if you got time check this out for me and let me know what you think
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921729
    test
  20. ryddxb

    ryddxb Ryd

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    holla

    holla, dope shit here man, ive heard some of ur stuff before man...keep on the grind..peep me and let me know what u think man, hit me on my board
    www.soundclick.com/ryd peep my new joint called "here we go"
    peace
    test
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