NEW SOLO - Not An Alcoholic - Produced By Mr. Kooman (i return All Hits)

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  1. CheddaCheese

    CheddaCheese The Cheese

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    Mixing sounds fine, vocals are nice and clear but I think the beat might be a little low.
    Flow, delivery and lyrical content is all on point.
    Hook worked for the track. Solid track overall.
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  2. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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    got at yall thanks
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  3. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    beat's pretty slick, i like the guitar
    im diggin your delivery...flow could be a little bit more fluid its kind of stop and go style
    hooks cool i like how it got all westcoast on me...flow got a tad better on the second verse...i think your flow might sound better if you rhyme more than one single vowel sounds...like intimidate and eliminate rhymes better on the third verse...im an entourage fan too btw, nice entourage reference...thanx peepin my track peace
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  4. BattleMindz

    BattleMindz New Member

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    Sup Prod... Returnin the favor
    I aint heard you in a minute...
    The beat is fresh... Koomans dope...
    The first verse was pretty fresh... I laughed at the "fuck with mes like teasin a tiger",
    Im feelin the look...Its a banger...
    You stepped up your flow on the second verse... The lion in a cage turnin to a sabertooth shit was dope..
    and you flipped that hard hitter flow scheme like crazy on the 3rd verse...
    I like this shit dude, it goes hard... But it ends suddenly.. you should look at fading the end of the beat out...
    Nice shit tho fam, stay on it
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  5. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

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    yea big points for all the mma drops ha - this shit is clean - love the beat, shits kinda funky - likin this right here

    good work
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  6. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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    this is a mad westcoast beat....im feeling this for sure...ur flow and shit is pretty nice...props on this man...mixing is pretty good too....good shit homie
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  7. |NoonZ™

    |NoonZ™ Tha Jackal

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    not sure if im feeling this beat... diggin that whole fighter topic in the 1st verse. flow's a lil choppy in the 2nd verse ie: "the neck is like a beer ready for a grip"... lmao i psycho witta liquor problem hahahaha... I like that "i dont give a fuck bout you" attitude you poured all over this track. good shit my dood.
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  8. THAREALTERRORR

    THAREALTERRORR New Member

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    remind me of a local dude i dont really mess with anymore because he just not on my level and wont really work hard enough to get there...You could use some more work on overall product. Just real talk dun. The hook is annoying to me.....I mean you doing your thing but its just not for me. You got some good lines tho, that ceiling fan line was good...haha..
    Check it.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/post-ya-audios-videos-here/1212699-check.html
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  9. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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    Ill check your ish out and i apreciate the honesty, however with a studio and an experienced engineer , I'd be on your level any day without me hearing you....thanks.
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  10. blitz204

    blitz204 BlitzBeats.com

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    Boxing match style track with 2 Rounds! EXTREMELY CREATIVE SONG!

    Click here Start Player
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  11. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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    whatever the fuck that means.
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  12. Smart Alick

    Smart Alick New Member

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    this is dope bro! beat is too nice. flow is crispy, digging your style on this. I think the hook is nice, "a psycho wit a liquor problem NOT an alcoholic!" haha!

    No lackluster verses here, diggin all 3. I love the part in the 3rd verse where ur like "ima hard headed far better bar spitter than u ever could be!" or sumthin like that haha, sweet flow right there broseph.

    This song is tight! Listened 3-4 times. =) good shit buddy. hit me back when you can yo! take care, keep it up!!

    http://board.rapmusic.com/post-ya-audios-videos-here/1213565-one-day-prod-sinima.html
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  13. OJ

    OJ Parksvegas Sniper

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    A psycho with a liquor problem not an alcoholic.

    Walkin up in the bar is my deadliest sin, lol, mine too. sabertooth, raw.

    loved this track. yeah your production is awesome. whole joint bangs, beat is great. No complaints here I really like your style u got going chorus again is deadly
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  14. OJ

    OJ Parksvegas Sniper

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    oh and ps - I am also a psycho with a liquor problem, but I am an alcoholic, so i don't drink no more. just peeped the joint once again better the 2nd time
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  15. EpicLipz

    EpicLipz New Member

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    Thanks homie
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  16. TenFold

    TenFold Planet Rock Nano-Bot

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    i think this is aiight..i'm not really feeling the content too much on this one though..but its obvious you have skills with rapping and making tracks..not a bad listen all in all - just not my preference..


    -10
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  17. Drschmalzy

    Drschmalzy Active Member

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  18. sayyas

    sayyas New Member

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    I just produced a track for an MMA guy... the intro song, check it at |mcsay.com| . Say - PHHAT Productions . Hip Hop . R&B

    Anyway, HOT TRACK for sure, we should connect on something
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  19. Yamil

    Yamil Fuck your best

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    haha prod still doing his shit! good chill track playa keep grinding!
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  20. harsh_times86

    harsh_times86 Maserito

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