** New sick Banger!** sick production "PUT it on ME"

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  1. Worst Nightmare

    Worst Nightmare The illest in my Era

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  2. Strange1

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    song is sick bro, that beat is catchy.... you got a smooth flow... I don't feel most clubby-type tracks but this track has a nice spin to it... quality is good too


    oh yeah, the album i posted is NOT mainstreamish in the least just to let you know

    but, yeah... this sick is track... i feel your style a lot

    stop sleeping on this artist folks!
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  3. SKWIRL

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    aight aight.... some real good ass quality... that make all the difference... you got a real nice style, remind me of chammillionaire a lil bit, you dont sound like him, just the way you flip the metas. love that nice&smooth sample... most cats prolly dont even remember that...
    1 prollem i got with this song... i think you need to do something to the hook to separate it from the verses, theres not enough difference between the two. you could ad a layer or 2 to the hook, or even eq it different and maybe put an echo, or reverb, or hell even a voicemachine on it... anything, but something... other than that this shit is super tight

    return the favor for me...... i got the same kinda quality
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=917853
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  4. Worst Nightmare

    Worst Nightmare The illest in my Era

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    how does this go unoticed?
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  6. Worst Nightmare

    Worst Nightmare The illest in my Era

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    nobody likes club songs?
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    yeah beats sick love sampled beats flow is def on point delivery nice lyrics is coo nothing corny which is a major plus hooks coo but like duke said above me it needs something else to make it standout since the beat doesnt breakdown but other then that hot track man
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  9. V.I.K

    V.I.K The Feedback Returner

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    Worst nightmare told me to return the favor to this thread...

    Ight... Flow definitely on point throughout, props on that. Presence on the mic is obvious, i mean i listened up even when u wasn't usin doubles or adlibs. Thas normally a good sign. Lol at the hook and the way it plays into the beginning of the 2nd verse. The hook is solid, im not sure if id exactly call it catchy, but if i listened to this more than once, i guess it would be. Overall, this is a solid track. Some might say its a little cliche, becuz of what it deals with throughout the song. But its definitely a well done track. Keep writin. 1
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  10. SKWIRL

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    you dont return favors? i left the link up^^^^there
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  11. Worst Nightmare

    Worst Nightmare The illest in my Era

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    ^^ i replied to yours
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  12. Logic

    Logic IDP Ya Herr'd?

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    this shit is wayy too surrrrious for this site famm.. lol


    they ain't even ready for it.. don't even know about it, truthfully



    be easy
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    sup folk? lol @ how the beat starts... damn u come on nice homie.. voice is straight.. fits the beat nicely.. vocals could be a lil louder.. quality is straight.. multies on point... you doin ya thing.. keep developin.. (and dont try to do songs jus to prove that you can.. do it when u really feel like that yanahmean?)
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    Returing the favor...listening...I'm really feelin the beat on this track. The quality is pretty good for the most part. Your voice is decent, you got a nice flow...alright rhyme scheme, you got some multies in there which is always good. The chorus fits the track nicely, nothin special but it gets the job done. Overall, a great track...keep it up.
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  17. Betty*Beretta

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    Listening

    Beats real nice...loving it

    Verses:
    Oh shit...real nice presence, came on the track strong. Real smooth voice and delivery. You got a real radio friendly style (good thing). "keeping tabs on you like the lid on a pop can" <---lol. Got some sick multis. nice shit

    Hook:
    pretty nice...blends in too much with the verse, i think you should make the transitions more evident

    Overall Im feeling this track, only problem is the hook to verse transitions, other than that, nice track. Props

    hey if you got time could you check this out for me, and let mek now what you think

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921729
    http://www.soundclick.com/artist/9/bettybaretta_music.htm
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    yeah this joint is definitely a club track...dope track & blessed that lovely....your flow was all over that & them punchlines was tight too....most certainly a hot track....keep doint ya thing homie

    holla back at me
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=921557
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  20. Worst Nightmare

    Worst Nightmare The illest in my Era

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    good stuff...^^^
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