[NEW] Shawn Phillips - Real Talk "21 Years In the Making"

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Shawn Phillips, Jan 22, 2011.

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  1. Shawn Phillips

    Shawn Phillips Area905

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    a freeverse off the 21 YTM Mixtape coming september 22 2011.

    YouTube - Shawn Phillips - Real Talk

    youtube kinda lowers the quality sadley.. but check it out and let me know what yall think!
    test
  2. Shawn Phillips

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  3. 3rd Inf Soldier

    3rd Inf Soldier Bellwingah, hey! Hey!

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    Listening as i type

    like the start of the beat

    prostitute line was nice

    u have a smooth flow, id like to hear some adlibs

    u said yearr weird lol

    waste lines was hot


    we should do a joint together
    test
  4. DeathChamberz

    DeathChamberz From the Page to da stage

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    Beat: I like thos anticipation building beats but expected a harder drop ok beat pretty good rap beat just not blow away.

    Lyrics: I think your lyrics are pretty basic No real word play no super clever lines. Nothing corny but very forgettable lyrics

    Delivery: Good voice I agree some adlibs or something to change up on the track would be good.

    Flow very consistent but no changes or anything.

    I would say it's ok but not really memorable for either good or bad



    Check the link please
    http://board.rapmusic.com/post-ya-a...presents-angels-demons-video-coming-soon.html
    test
  5. Shawn Phillips

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    good looks uppin
    test
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