New r&b singer lookin for critique

Discussion in 'Audio Emcee Hook Ups' started by .+Erica Evans+., Nov 7, 2004.

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  1. .+Erica Evans+.

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  3. Embassy Sweetz

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    ehhh nuthing mind-blowing...it sounds like u sing from ur nose...u gotta sing from ur stomach...u could be decent if u had a vocal coach or somthin..beats were generic..nuthin great...im assuming u mixed it urself cuz its pretty bad mixed..and u peak at times..but if ur just startin out its not bad...everything just sounds un-polished and amatuer..even some of the writing and premises of the songs...but as i said...if ur just starting out than this is all expected...u can only get better so just stay at it...pz
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    .+Erica Evans+. Brown Sugar

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    i use cool edit

    I'm tryin to find a vocal coach but its hard. The ones I've come a cross only specialize in broadway and stuff and i don't wanna be molded into that.


    Good lookin out
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  5. loonitic

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    song is aight, voice is aight but def needs some work...but u are young prolly so im sure youll be cool.
    intro is really good
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  6. MagicFX

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    yea.. this isn't bad.. I like the tone of ya voice.. it's pretty hot.. the fellas would be feelin this for sure on a dope beat ft. with an ill MC..
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  7. Skrybe SK

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    sounds pretty good considering. Like most have said you get a good producer and a vocal coach and you can make some noise. I'd definitely make a track with you...holla at a niggra
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  8. SALVDOR

    SALVDOR Delyreeuz Owns Me

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    ight its playin


    quality needs some work


    ight on ya singin... i can tell u right now... because of mixin.. it takes away A LOT...... your quality has potential to be better.. u just need someone who knows how to edit & mix...


    i agree u need to sing wit ya stomach more....... but also song writin & formation.. (of your transitions between verses & bridges)

    could be upped more



    Hit me on AIM if u catch me on... im tha master of Cool Edit here .. so yea i can give u some tips


    u can peep my music to check my 'quality' & mixin status


    AIM = Mr Salvdor


    pz - Sal
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  9. VerbalMercenary

    VerbalMercenary New Member

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    damn man ya quality is pretty nice poetic cesar what do u do eq compress and reverb?
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  10. E MoneyClips

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    That's mixing.
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  11. Ra The Nomad666

    Ra The Nomad666 Im Fraud Hukstable

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    indeed
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  12. SALVDOR

    SALVDOR Delyreeuz Owns Me

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    lol @ thats mixing lol

    i giggled



    anywayz.. everything i do.. is just my process i've created over tha last 2 years or so


    eq'n & reverb are a part of mixin... a big part of mixin is wut u do.. when u do it, tha order u do it in..


    the Least amount of eq & reverb u use tha better... people here don't realize... Less is more in a lot of ways.. and they over eq & verb shit



    my process is fairly simple wit only 4-6 steps dependin on wut sound im goin for
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  14. .+Erica Evans+.

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    Good lookin out

    help wit mixin is welcome cause i have no idea what im doin really when it comes to that
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  15. .+Erica Evans+.

    .+Erica Evans+. Brown Sugar

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    poetic cesar

    im lovin your flow, specially on break you off
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  16. Nokas

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    not bad,,,,, could use some touch up work on mixing etc,.., but i can tell u got heart in it.
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