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  1. MaseGage

    MaseGage Medicated Productions

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  2. MaseGage

    MaseGage Medicated Productions

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    Uppin...through the mass feed I just gave - haha
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  3. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    peepin now.. sound pretty comfortable i like the beat mic sounds a lil cloudy a lil low flow nice but u just need 2 add a lil more emotion only thing holdin ya back lyrics and shit are there jsut work on that emotion and up the vocals and clean em up and u there good drop stay up homie
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  4. Nick HaTT

    Nick HaTT New Member

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    watup, thanks for the feedback..

    neway, htis beat is prety hot, not bad..
    flow is straight.. its on point for the most hte part..
    ur emotion is def lackin.. sounds like ur readin it off a peice of paper..
    hook is ok..
    quality is not bad, not a bad trak, hola at me
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  5. KnightMere

    KnightMere KnightMere

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    peepin now...this aint bad at all man...mic is a lil cloudy..ur flow is is pretty nice just add a little emotion and you should be set..not much shit you gotta improve on man..you madd potential...keep droppin man nice track....
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  6. bensik

    bensik No Vaccine.

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    Pretty nice beat...vocals seem a lil' low.
    Flow is on point for the most part. You need a stronger presence though.
    Lyrics pretty decent...overall i see potential. Keep doin ya thing my dude.
    Pretty str8 track.
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  7. .:AC:.

    .:AC:. Smokes or Bananas

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    yo man its l-AC-l

    whats up man

    i am impressed better than what i expected

    for third audio thats good
    if you stick at it for a long time you can do something with it for sure
    keep your head up and dont let no one tell you how it is
    thats only if you want to do it up like the king though

    HAHAHAHAA
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  8. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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    sup thanks for comming to my thread sorry im hittin u back so late though.. umm yea this is a dope beat.. u got a real nice flow.. i think ya delivery and mic presence can be worked on your lines are hot though i like how u use them and like use the wordplay.. but yea ya qualilty can be up'd and vocals.... but besides that this shyt is pretty dope keep up the nice work yo
    peace

    complex
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  9. MaseGage

    MaseGage Medicated Productions

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    I actually do read it off a piece of paper...

    Y'all memorize yours? I have the memorization skills of a two year old.

    But damn - Thanks for all the feed. I truly appreciate it.
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  10. MaseGage

    MaseGage Medicated Productions

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    Uppin before I leave - Where's all the return feed?
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  11. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    first, I'ma copy and paste what you said on soundclick
    "I tore down those first two audios. They weren't really my style. This is what I'm comfortable with. If you like it - plenty more where this comes from. If you don't - stick around for the variety along the way. "
    especially at an early stage in ya career, I'd suggest not stayin within the comfort zone...try to expand becuz you have the freedom to....

    as for memorization and not reading, I got the same problem....I like to record the song first for my purposes only, and then I keep listenin to it over and over again...until I memorize the joint....it helps delivery

    aside from that, you gotta pretty solid flow, and ya lyrics are at least intriguing...lotta truths in these verses, that's fa sho.....delivery ok, but, memorization would definitely help it....for a 3rd audio, you got massive promise....keep that shit up....

    peace
    Envizion
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  12. Tr3_Face

    Tr3_Face Denver's Finest

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    this is a nice piece....beat is sick......hook flows good and after i read what it said its a tight ass hook.......verses are nice, u got talent if this is just yor 3rd audio
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  13. T_L_E

    T_L_E New Member

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    G- u got thAT on point good vibe, i like it diffrent from how i do it but you go it goin i like
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  14. RiggsofHTI

    RiggsofHTI New Member

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    beat was good..alot of energy..for a 3rd audio it was pretty impressive..flow was cool and lyrics and content were on point..keep up the good wrk,

    -Riggs
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  15. MaseGage

    MaseGage Medicated Productions

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    Awesome feed guys - I'm definitely lookin foward to droppin somethin memorized soon.
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  16. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    This beat is sick. Impressive for 3rd audio. But still could use a lot of work.

    Like someone said, it does sound like your reading it off paper. Im gonna tell you this, you should have the lyrics in front of you, but they should only be for reference and not to read off of. A lot of times for me i cant nail it perfect until like the 5th take, and by that point ive already spit that part several times and already know exactly how i want that part to sound, you need to just get into it.. spit it until it sounds just how you want it.. until you spit it and think "dammn that was how i want the final to sound"

    if you do that, you will instantly be much better, just more emotion and when i said above

    if you are looking at the lyrics, you shouldnt even see the words, you should be concentrating totally on your vocals
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  17. MaseGage

    MaseGage Medicated Productions

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    thanks Neruk - good feedback man.
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