Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by L e S, Jan 19, 2006.
here it is LIVE (snoop show)
Okay...flow is nice as hell.
Beat is coo'...you rode it nice as hell.
Pretty nice hook - gets the job done....so thats whats up.
Dude on the hook sound like pitbull...heh.
Nice track overall. Keep bangin.
Get at me bruh...
Nice flow first verse - LOVING that shit.
Target is a beast on the hook, as usual.
2nd verse - ain't feelin that slower shit on this beat really...lyrically it's good though
3rd verse... damn... it's slow again. I dunno, this shit don't sound right after hearin the first verse. The flow is still on point and everything, it's hard to explain, it's just too laid back or somethin.
Good song overall, especially that first verse, good quality of course. Nice track Laws, keep it up.
Definately a banger, we should callab and take some beats from my site.
this is myspace site
beat is hot...
ur 1st verse was on point...flow was nice..delivery was nice 2....lyrics was on point/clear n undertsandable...
2nd-slowed it down....still coo but the fast 1 was better in my opinion,lyrically n delivery wise u still on point tho
damn bufferin shit....ok...3rd verse-still slowed,its tight but damn...the first verse had me noddin n all...ur still on point tho
hook-is kinda simple...its not bad tho...
overall this was good..quality is sharp...hook was ok...first verse stuck out most to me tho..u killed wit that...props `1
What else can I say? Another banger from Laws...Verses were on point and flow was retarded..I liked when you switched it up, but still kept that charisma that prooves Laws is raw with his..no matter what style...
This cat right here be puttin down some raw shit without much effort..that shows true talent..Besides killin the Snoop concert, this goes to show Laws' versatility and wittyness..
We still gotta get up on that track fam..whenever you done signin autographs..lol..
Good shit like usual
you def got better hooks than me....I feel like I'm doin something wrong, when I write the repetitive hooks like that (as you can tell from my track you peeped)......
ya flow is dope on all the verses, but I'm wit dude above wit questioning the switch....that first verse is fast-paced and sets that type of tone, and then you rockin it on the slower tip...flow is dope, like I said, in all the places....just the slow tempo after a fast tempo jump off is different....
can't hate though, dude opened for snoop
I liked what you were doing with the track when kept slowing the beat to a stop for your a cappella points. Nice creative twist. Your message and hook were both solid. No complaints other than the fact that myspace was taking forever to buffer.
just returnin' the feed man...dope track...you're nice on the mic...i enjoyed the listen...keep it up...
peace and blessings
Laws - I gave you some feed on this bro, think you could hit my track up?
yo laws paid me $3,000 for this hook. I set up his show wit snoop, cuz i know snoops cusin Scoop.
Holler Back Younging!
j/k your ass better let me get on stage for the Wu tang show dick to do this joint!!
beat is aite....like the rapid flow on this jumpoff...the beat combined with flow so far remind me of an old crucial conflict song....pretty ill....lol @ ht country ass on the hook....
second verse flow reminded me of benefit for a minute ....your voice not really the size...nice how you keep the structure...the BIG drop in tempo of vocals was a nice touch...
i didnt really like this beat all that much but the overall production is ill....solid joint.
hard target get @ me mayne...we need to rip up a beat or somethin....im bout to drop a mixtape on Los Angeles and i need a few quality soundin heads on my beats....not to mention prolly some graphic workz.
laws if you interested get at me aswell....i known ht for a minute but ....if you interseted in lace'n a beat get @ me...
i heard this when u made the thread bout the snoop show
and i had it on repeat the entire night.
love the line bout chicks in bad homes
an the 26 letters one..
overall im really feelin it, one of my favorite joints period. period. comma, semi colin;
haha stay up.
snoop show at the house of blues huh?..
..ur with impact all stars huh laws?
u might know my brother in law, he goes by "dj dolo"?
na, i opened the snoop show in st petersburg
and im not a member of Full Impact
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