(*New*) HoodHop - Different World

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  1. ClassX

    ClassX Member

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    lol shitty quality.. sound kinda like eminem.. feelin the energy.. flow is coo.. deliver is what it is.. feelin this ish.. good shit man...
    test
  2. DavenportRepper

    DavenportRepper New Member

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    thanks man^.. quality's that bad lol? aight thou... glad ya liked
    test
  3. emcee50killa

    emcee50killa New Member

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    that comes in louder than I ever imagined....

    production is tight.....flow is not bad at all.....some parts are nicer than others....

    the hook is too loud and rocky....but this is not bad at all.

    need a little polishing, but not that bad. and production is beautiful
    test
  4. DavenportRepper

    DavenportRepper New Member

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    thanks man^...
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  5. Raticus

    Raticus Beatz for the streetz....

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    Track is cool... nice sample selection... Mcees are okay.... Sounds like they are playing or freestyle... Not back at all.... Im listen again....

    Keep em coming...

    Raticus
    test
  6. OurSin

    OurSin lol @ equality

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    Not feeling this beat at all......Flow is solid, delivery needs some polishing......just need to carry your voice a bit better, but your comming along pretty good. You rushed a couple lines here and there in the first 2 verses. Next time you should pick a better beat, i mean it aint BAD i just aint feeling it i guess. 3rd verse same as other 2. Flow is pretty solid except a few rush bars, and you should work on the vocal inflection a bit, sound too un polished at this point. But, despite the small crits, i can see some potential if you work on the beat choice and polish up.

    good shit man, peace
    test
  7. brayman

    brayman SeekingTruthNews.com

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    shit iz good. nuthin more to say. u already kno. keep it up man..!!
    test
  8. Mr. Manager

    Mr. Manager Active Member

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    sharpen ya flow, nice beat though...i want it lol...you kinda sound like that dude from the offspring.

    sharpen up ya flow though
    test
  9. DavenportRepper

    DavenportRepper New Member

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    AIM=eastdport for the beat^ and thanks for good feedback yall lol
    test
  10. killa_bone

    killa_bone New Member

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    Haha, I fucking loved the beat, that was cool. I'd definitaly play this again but I wern't erally feeling the lyrics. Were a bit simple, I think you could write better lyrics if you thought about it. Seems like you just stuck with the first thing you wrote rather than thinkin about it and writing something ebtter. Flow was ok could be a bit better but you have potential, would like to hear your tracks when ya skills are polished up.
    test
  11. Brownstar

    Brownstar Davadrian

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    returnin...

    I'm actually feelin this.. I appreciate music that is different. The rock aspect of this is real nice. I think the hook could have been much better though, would have worked as a bridge maybe. The verse beat is nice. As for the raps, I'm enjoying it actually.. Not my style, but it's cool..
    test
  12. Dskillz

    Dskillz aka MG The Future

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    Yo this is some rock and roll - i like the snare on the this joint.

    the rapper reminds me of this rapper named Amen mixed with eminem...

    This one is for the BURBS....

    rockin !
    test
  13. Big Leak

    Big Leak Get Rich or Get Richer

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    beat is aight

    the song format was boring thou, verse, hook, verse, hook, verse, hook

    flow has some kinks in it

    delivery had a lot of energy

    mic presence was decent

    emotion showed in your energy

    breath control can be better

    and as for the topic, it wasnt always consistant
    test
  14. DavenportRepper

    DavenportRepper New Member

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    thanks for good feedback yall^
    test
  15. RiggsofHTI

    RiggsofHTI New Member

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    this was pretty ill..i aint like the chorus to much but other then that..not bad..keep it up..1
    test
  16. Rheotaxis

    Rheotaxis The Devils Advocate

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    some soft rock shit...i like this...damn this shit is hittin hard as fuck...you hype as fuck...damn i'm feelin this good job homie....your voice and delivery on this reminds me of some kotton mouth kings shit
    test
  17. M.D0T

    M.D0T New Member

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    your shits cool man....not really diggin ur voice but i guess some people might like it....neways u should check out my other songs your probably enjoy the lyrics alot more
    test
  18. Flic.

    Flic. N.O till I G.O

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    weird beat... this remind me of some beastie boys shit or something.. i dunno got a old school vibe... not really my steez but keep doing you
    test
  19. DavenportRepper

    DavenportRepper New Member

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    yeah others said i sound like the beastie boys^ lol and thanks for everyone up there likin.. yeah im hype lol
    test
  20. Nvs -=1=-

    Nvs -=1=- Resident Racist

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    I guess it's purely matter of opinion...but I couldn't stand this track...as a listener...as a music listener this is not something I would bump in my car or ever listen to again...not hatin tho my dude...Bez cuz...


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    Come On & Everyone

    Holler
    test
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