New Drop from Ruthle$$- "For You"

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  1. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    test
  2. imstillqb05

    imstillqb05 New Member

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    Might need a link?
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  3. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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  4. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    please peep this song i need some feedback
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  5. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    dont sleep on this one...i need some feedback
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  6. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    come on...anybodyyy
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  7. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    Can i please get some feedback on this track its my first drop on rapmusic....get at me!
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  8. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    damn sleepers
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  9. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    patiently waitin for a comment to a explode onnnn..
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  10. .Azrael.

    .Azrael. Better Than You.

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    lol @ you calling my rhymes elementary, you don't have any multies and your rhymeshemes are "elemantary"

    anyways, this was ok, the flow was kinda cool, a lil repetetive, wasn't really feeling the hook, voice is aight, sounds pretty generic, lol, rhymes are mad simple, just some one syllable shits, nothing really special, lol, anyways like i said, this was ok.
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  11. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    heh no no no...dont come at me dogg all mad...ppreciate the feedback but this has to be on the elementary side cause its a girl type song...any otha shit is strictly raw material..dont get mad at me man wen im jus sayin the truth and how i feel
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  12. Da Protégé

    Da Protégé The P.R.O.

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    listens...


    Emotion is aight...work on it some... lyrics are average... elevate that... work on delivery... flow is basic but it works... shit was aight though...not a bad drop

    hook was different...lmao...thanks for my feed...

    Props... 7.5/10
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  13. Toucan_Sam1

    Toucan_Sam1 aka 2can Shakur

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    Lyrically it's aight, and good on both verses for staying on topic. Need to work more on flow and pace. The beat is aight, a lil on the soft side, but it works.

    Peace.
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  14. Ruthle$$

    Ruthle$$ "The Bad Guy"

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    thanks fellas for the comments
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