[NEW!!] Daydream (RMX) [MIXTAPE TRACK] - D. Omen

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Huey Fig Newton, Nov 1, 2006.

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  1. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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  2. Scribe

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    yeah, im thinking of rockin' this beat too. you already know what i think of the lyrics...definately up there. word of advice: fit less words into your bars. i know its nice to come off as "lyrical", but your flow sounds 10x better when you do that. yes, i mean you personally.
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  3. amorphouz

    amorphouz New Member

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    Alright. Good voice, nice and clear. Lyrics are fine, no prob there. Delivery needs some work. At points I was bobbing along with ya and then out of nowhere you would fumble. Clean that up and this track is good (for a mixtape). Another note on your flow, just keep it simple and remain consistent throughout so you grab the attention and never let it go.

    Shoot me some feed...

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=14174686
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  4. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    thanx for the indepth feed.
    test
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