Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Huey Fig Newton, Nov 1, 2006.
yeah, im thinking of rockin' this beat too. you already know what i think of the lyrics...definately up there. word of advice: fit less words into your bars. i know its nice to come off as "lyrical", but your flow sounds 10x better when you do that. yes, i mean you personally.
Alright. Good voice, nice and clear. Lyrics are fine, no prob there. Delivery needs some work. At points I was bobbing along with ya and then out of nowhere you would fumble. Clean that up and this track is good (for a mixtape). Another note on your flow, just keep it simple and remain consistent throughout so you grab the attention and never let it go.
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thanx for the indepth feed.
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