Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Huey Fig Newton, Apr 11, 2008.
It's alright, the song needs a third verse though. Imo it would be feel more complete.
i'm fuckin with this son
omen's elevated by leaps and bounds... you are almost there son
writeous did his duty, verse was ill
the female vocal was a nice touch
LMAO @ for promotional use only.
And we KNOW it was by escalator because dude's got a 1/4" vertical and gravity hates him.
Agreed though... musically I can appreciate this.
nice shyt yo
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you sound alot alot better than since i last heard. i didnt get the schumacher line though.
who is on the hook?
write is nice as usual. this does need a third verse tho. an 8 & 8 3rd verse wouldve been dope.
hmm, maybe we'll do that for the final version on the mixtape. we need a formula for racist/races
SnOmen... diggin' the track overall nig, only thing I think you seriously need to work on is breath control, at least fade it or do something with it man, it hurt your overall performance on the track... best part was at the end when your breath was in check and you were on some point with your flows.
Btw, nice Cover for your mixtape, I'll cop one ya faggot ass bitch... I support artists regardless.
yea yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa fresh!!!
turn your vocals down (d omen) and do a 3rd verse
k, will do for the final version.
I know you see what I wrote Damien you ma fuckie.
how the fuck did you get writeous on a track? damn, hes like the illest nigga that been on RM that dont ever drop shit or come around
good track tho
ok i lied, i was gonna drop more feedback after i peeped it.. but the song is nowhere to be found, your page doesnt even have a music player that loads?? how are people peeping it? and writeous dont even got it on his page..
it's there, I promise.
im interested in collaborating. shot you a pm.
ah yea I got the myspace one. thanx
oh shit ... obama/omen went in.... i like the rhyme scheme for sure. you spit alot of real shit tho. Writeous came hard too....so aloof
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Hot shit fam, I'm feelin it. Love to get on a track witchu.
Hit up my thread bruh.
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