[NEW!] D. Omen - Art Of Storytelling Pt. ∞ (feat. Writeous)

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  1. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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  2. Arkon

    Arkon ''Ozone check ya PMs''

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    It's alright, the song needs a third verse though. Imo it would be feel more complete.
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  3. (( Ozone ))

    (( Ozone )) t-t-t-t-toxiq

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    i'm fuckin with this son

    omen's elevated by leaps and bounds... you are almost there son

    writeous did his duty, verse was ill

    the female vocal was a nice touch
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  4. lXl Anthem lXl

    lXl Anthem lXl New Member

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    LMAO @ for promotional use only.
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  5. mr.mdz

    mr.mdz Never Lie

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    And we KNOW it was by escalator because dude's got a 1/4" vertical and gravity hates him.

    Agreed though... musically I can appreciate this.
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  6. nice shyt yo
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  7. Writeous

    Writeous Loose Leaf Bruce Lee

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  8. El King

    El King www.myspace.com/jamelking

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    you sound alot alot better than since i last heard. i didnt get the schumacher line though.

    who is on the hook?


    write is nice as usual. this does need a third verse tho. an 8 & 8 3rd verse wouldve been dope.
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  9. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    hmm, maybe we'll do that for the final version on the mixtape. we need a formula for racist/races

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  10. Nvs -=1=-

    Nvs -=1=- Resident Racist

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    SnOmen... diggin' the track overall nig, only thing I think you seriously need to work on is breath control, at least fade it or do something with it man, it hurt your overall performance on the track... best part was at the end when your breath was in check and you were on some point with your flows.

    Btw, nice Cover for your mixtape, I'll cop one ya faggot ass bitch... I support artists regardless.
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  11. SpoonFull

    SpoonFull Lovely

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    yea yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa fresh!!!

    turn your vocals down (d omen) and do a 3rd verse
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  12. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    k, will do for the final version.
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  13. Nvs -=1=-

    Nvs -=1=- Resident Racist

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    I know you see what I wrote Damien you ma fuckie.
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  14. jayoo

    jayoo new york representative

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    how the fuck did you get writeous on a track? damn, hes like the illest nigga that been on RM that dont ever drop shit or come around

    good track tho
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  15. jayoo

    jayoo new york representative

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    ok i lied, i was gonna drop more feedback after i peeped it.. but the song is nowhere to be found, your page doesnt even have a music player that loads?? how are people peeping it? and writeous dont even got it on his page..
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  16. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    it's there, I promise.
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  17. SM Productions

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    im interested in collaborating. shot you a pm.
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  18. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

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    ah yea I got the myspace one. thanx
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