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  1. KeneishaD23

    KeneishaD23 New Member

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    Tryin’ to stay on my feet and survive
    Emotions as low as the sea; Low tide
    Kinda hard when ya mom don’t want you by her side
    Shit got my shoulders weighed down
    Don’t know what to do,
    Ol’ man said niqqa stick around
    Maybe I should just dip from this small town
    Can’t think straight
    Sleepless nights
    My girl restless, all we do is fight
    Interrogation when I walk thru the door
    Bitch you should be the one dropping to the floor
    Why you doin this, why you doin that?
    She a fucking grenade, I didn’t sign up for combat
    Can’t take it
    Mind wasting
    Still got my family bitching; bitter tasting
    Everything has got me shaking, pacing,
    My girl know my heart’s hers for the taking
    But my mind’s deliberately changing
    Maybe it’s for the best, maybe for the worst
    Mouth so dry, can you please quench my thirst
    No more tears left in my soul, it’s sold
    Eye sockets drier than they eva been before
    Heart’s beating slow; Black hole
    Body cold as ice; I confess
    Trynna find time to fit in success
    Maybe it’s time to make time for me,
    Our love’s so blind we can’t see,
    Imma tell you a lil about what was destined to be
    test
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    KeneishaD23 New Member

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    Could def be deeper, ran out of time still working on it. Feedback would be sweet. Thanks:)
    test
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